列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar ar word choice improve korte paren. Apnar answer e kichu spelling mistake ache, ar sentence gulo clear na. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, jate meaning bhalo bujha jai. Apni example hishebe bolte paren, 'Yes, I always make a shopping list because I often forget what I need to buy. It helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary things.'

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I often forget what I need to buy. It helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary things.

建議: Apnar answer e sentence structure ar clarity improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun direct ar clear sentence bolte. Apnar answer e kichu word use kora hoyeche jeta confusing. Apni bolte paren, 'Yes, I prepare a list for my work because it helps me complete my tasks efficiently and stay organized.'

範例: Yes, I prepare a list for my work because it helps me complete my tasks efficiently and stay organized.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar word choice improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke simple ar clear korte. Apni bolte paren, 'Some people don't like making lists because they have good memories and can remember their tasks easily. Also, they may have fewer tasks to manage.'

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they have good memories and can remember their tasks easily. Also, they may have fewer tasks to manage.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar clarity improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke simple ar logical korte. Apni bolte paren, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it saves paper, is portable, and I can easily access and share it with others.'

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it saves paper, is portable, and I can easily access and share it with others.

× Yes, I do list a leap list when I go to shop because I just forgot everything what I intended to buy so I waste it down then I go to the market.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because I often forget everything I intend to buy, so I write it down before I go to the market.

The phrase 'do list a leap list' is incorrect; the correct verb phrase is 'do make a list'. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to use the gerund form after 'go'. 'Waste it down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write it down'. The sentence also needs proper tense consistency and clearer structure.

× Yes, I do prepare a list for my work because it is my work done and whatever I wanted to do, so I make it done heavily.

✓ Yes, I do prepare a list for my work because it helps me get my work done and complete whatever I want to do, so I make sure it is done properly.

The phrase 'it is my work done' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me get my work done'. 'Whatever I wanted to do' should be 'whatever I want to do' to maintain present tense. 'Make it done heavily' is incorrect; a better phrase is 'make sure it is done properly'. The sentence needs clearer verb forms and proper tense usage.

× Some people do not like making these because they can remember what they intended to do and moreover they have the they have good memories and they have less than lace works than the usual people have.

✓ Some people do not like making lists because they can remember what they intend to do; moreover, they have good memories and have less work than usual people.

The phrase 'making these' is vague; it should be 'making lists'. 'They intended to do' should be 'they intend to do' to keep present tense. 'Less than lace works' is incorrect; it should be 'less work'. The sentence also has redundancy and needs clearer quantifiers and structure.

× Before making a list on my phone because it need not scary a paper and it can be movable at any time and I can see it at my ease and even though I can send the list to others who can benefit me from helping me.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it does not require paper, it is portable at any time, I can see it easily, and I can even send the list to others who can help me.

'Before making a list' is incorrect in this context; 'I prefer making a list' is better. 'Need not scary a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'does not require paper'. 'Movable' is better replaced with 'portable'. 'See it at my ease' should be 'see it easily'. The sentence also needs clearer conjunctions and verb forms.