列表— Part 1 評分報告
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Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Definitely 'cause I usually forget stuff really often so I have to make a list when I go shopping or else I'm just going to forget what, forget what to buy and then come back once again.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I've actually been trying to make a list for my work, for example, what to do today and then what to improve today and I think it really works.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Umm, I think the main reason is that umm people don't want to take too much time on planning. They want to get straight to like doing the things and which is not really good since they might forget something. Or the second thing is they might just be lazy to plan.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I I prefer you doing a list on my phone, since I can take my phone everywhere I go and I can always check on my list, for example, what did I not do, what did I do? And if I write it on a paper, then it might get lost really easily. So yeah, on the phone.
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Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答较为口语化且有重复，建议避免重复表达，语言更自然流畅。可以简化句子结构，避免使用口语填充词。
範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items easily. This helps me remember everything and avoid making extra trips.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答内容较简单，建议增加细节说明为什么列表有效，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
範例: Yes, I make daily to-do lists for work, which help me prioritize tasks and track my progress. This method has improved my productivity significantly.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中有较多口语填充词，表达不够简洁。建议减少重复，使用更正式的表达，并提供更具体的理由。
範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find planning time-consuming and prefer to start tasks immediately. Additionally, some may feel too lazy to organize their work beforehand.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并用更清晰的句子表达观点。
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, allowing me to check and update tasks easily. Paper lists can be lost or damaged, so digital lists are more convenient.
文法
× Definitely 'cause I usually forget stuff really often so I have to make a list when I go shopping or else I'm just going to forget what, forget what to buy and then come back once again.
✓ Definitely, because I usually forget stuff really often, so I have to make a list when I go shopping, or else I'm just going to forget what to buy and then come back once again.
原句中使用了口语缩写“'cause”，在正式书面语中应使用完整形式“because”。此外，句子中缺少逗号，导致句子结构不清晰。建议加上逗号以分隔句子成分，使句子更通顺。
× I I prefer you doing a list on my phone, since I can take my phone everywhere I go and I can always check on my list, for example, what did I not do, what did I do?
✓ I prefer making a list on my phone, since I can take my phone everywhere I go and I can always check my list, for example, what I have not done, what I have done.
原句中“I I prefer you doing a list”中的“you doing”用法错误，应使用动名词形式“making”来表达“制作清单”。此外，后半句中“what did I not do, what did I do”时态不符合语境，改为现在完成时“what I have not done, what I have done”更合适。
× They want to get straight to like doing the things and which is not really good since they might forget something.
✓ They want to get straight to doing things, which is not really good since they might forget something.
原句中“and which is not really good”连接不当，使用“and”与“which”连用导致句子结构混乱。应去掉“and”，直接用“which”引导定语从句，使句子结构正确。
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