列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "there's there are" and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences for effectiveness.

範例: Sometimes I make a list when I shop, especially if I need specific important items. Otherwise, I usually shop spontaneously, picking things that fit my budget.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid filler words and correct minor grammar issues for better fluency.

範例: I don't have a job since I'm a student, so I don't make work lists. However, I sometimes create daily to-do lists, but I find it hard to follow them because I tend to procrastinate.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your thoughts more logically and use linking words like 'because' and 'however' correctly. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more concise.

範例: Personally, I make lists only for important tasks with deadlines. However, some people dislike lists because they prefer to go with the flow instead of following strict reminders.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid informal fillers like 'Yeah' and try to use more precise vocabulary. Also, explain briefly why you prefer your phone with linking words for coherence.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier to check reminders anytime. Plus, digital lists often have checkboxes, which help me keep track of my tasks.

× Sometimes I make a list when I shop. When there's there are really specific things which are very important for me to get, then I make a list.

✓ Sometimes I make a list when I shop. When there are really specific things which are very important for me to get, then I make a list.

The phrase 'there's there are' is redundant and incorrect. Only one form should be used. Since the subject is plural ('specific things'), 'there are' is correct. Remove 'there's' to fix the sentence.

× But other than that I usually just randomly shop anything which is under my budget.

✓ But other than that, I usually just randomly shop for anything which is under my budget.

The verb 'shop' usually requires the preposition 'for' when followed by an object. Omitting 'for' is incorrect. Adding 'for' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence.

× Actually I don't work, I'm just a student so I don't really make a list for my work.

✓ Actually, I don't work; I'm just a student, so I don't really make a list for work.

The phrase 'for my work' is awkward here because the student is a student, not an employee. Using 'for work' is more natural. Also, adding commas improves clarity.

× Other than that, usually for my day I yes I make A to do list sometimes, not always.

✓ Other than that, usually for my day, yes, I make a to-do list sometimes, not always.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound adjective. Adding commas improves readability.

× However it's really hard for me to follow it.

✓ However, it's really hard for me to follow it.

A comma is needed after 'However' to separate the introductory word from the main clause, improving sentence flow.

× Me personally, I make less when I think a task is very important and I need to get it done till a due date.

✓ Personally, I make fewer lists when I think a task is very important and I need to get it done by a due date.

'Make less' is incorrect when referring to countable items like 'lists'; 'fewer' is the correct quantifier. Also, 'till' should be 'by' when referring to deadlines.

× I think uh However, although some people don't make a list because they don't like to be set on a certain reminder to do things, they like to go with the flow for doing the tasks.

✓ I think, however, some people don't make a list because they don't like to be set on a certain reminder to do things; they like to go with the flow when doing tasks.

The original sentence misuses 'However' and 'although' together, which is redundant. Also, punctuation is needed to separate ideas clearly. 'For doing the tasks' is better expressed as 'when doing tasks'.

× Personally, I mostly make lists on my phone because for me it's just easier to look through my phone whenever I need to remind myself of something.

✓ Personally, I mostly make lists on my phone because, for me, it's just easier to look through my phone whenever I need to remind myself of something.

Commas are needed around 'for me' as it is a parenthetical phrase, improving sentence clarity.

× Yeah, I usually just enjoy making the phone list with the box of to do lists.

✓ Yeah, I usually just enjoy making the phone list with the box of to-do lists.

'To do lists' should be hyphenated as 'to-do lists' because it is a compound adjective describing 'lists'.