列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar phrases like "what I want to shop" and "what I want to purchase." Try to use linking words to make your answer flow better.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone because I often forget what I need to buy at the market.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid redundancy and focus on answering the question directly.

範例: Yes, I sometimes make lists to organize my work, especially when collaborating on projects with friends. For instance, I write down tasks to stay focused and ensure I complete everything on time.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words and avoid repeating similar ideas. Try to be more specific in your explanation.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember everything they need to buy or do without writing it down.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient; I always carry it with me, so I can add or check tasks anytime. Also, my phone sends reminders, which helps me stay organized.

× I don't remember what I want to shop, what I want to purchase in the market

✓ I don't remember what I want to buy, what I want to purchase in the market

The verb 'shop' is incorrectly used here. 'Shop' is an activity, not something you 'want to' as an object. The correct verb to use when referring to items you want to get is 'buy'. So, 'what I want to buy' is correct.

× I make a list on my phone

✓ I make a list on my phone

This sentence is correct as 'make a list on my phone' is a proper use of the preposition 'on' to indicate the device used.

× I need to originate my work completely a project with my friends

✓ I need to complete a project with my friends

The verb 'originate' is incorrectly used here. The correct verb is 'complete' to express finishing a project. Also, the phrase 'completely a project' is incorrect; it should be 'complete a project'.

× I write down on a list for things I want to buy or take

✓ I write down a list of things I want to buy or take

The phrase 'write down on a list for things' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'write down a list of things' to indicate the items being listed.

× I need to finish from my project

✓ I need to finish my project

The preposition 'from' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'finish my project' without any preposition.

× make a list, help me stay focus and complete my work anytime anything important overall I

✓ Making a list helps me stay focused and complete my work anytime; it is important overall

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions and verb forms. 'Make a list' should be 'Making a list' to act as the subject. 'Help me stay focus' should be 'helps me stay focused' for subject-verb agreement and correct adjective form. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× Because some people have the nice memory to recall that all the things

✓ Because some people have a good memory to recall all the things

The phrase 'the nice memory' is incorrect; 'a good memory' is the proper expression. Also, 'that all the things' is incorrect; it should be 'all the things' without 'that'.

× That's why they not making the list because they remember all thing what they want to purchase or what they want to do in their project or something

✓ That's why they do not make the list because they remember everything they want to purchase or do in their project or something

The phrase 'they not making' is incorrect; it should be 'they do not make' for proper negation and tense. 'All thing' should be 'everything' for correct quantification. 'What they want to purchase or what they want to do' can be simplified to 'they want to purchase or do'.

× Actually I prefer to make a list on my phone

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone

This sentence is correct except for missing a comma after 'Actually' for better readability.

× It's more convenient because I always carry phone with me so I can add and check task anytime

✓ It's more convenient because I always carry my phone with me so I can add and check tasks anytime

The phrase 'carry phone' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my'. Also, 'check task' should be plural 'check tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks.

× Also phone send me the reminder reminder because I always want to check what I want to do at that time

✓ Also, the phone sends me reminders because I always want to check what I need to do at that time

The verb 'send' should be in third person singular form 'sends' to agree with the singular subject 'phone'. 'Reminder reminder' is a repetition error; it should be 'reminders'. 'What I want to do' can be better expressed as 'what I need to do' for clarity.