列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight awkwardness in phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Actually, I usually don't make a shopping list because I believe I can remember everything I need. However, I often end up wandering through aisles, hoping the products will remind me. Therefore, I realize that making a list would help me shop more efficiently and avoid forgetting important items.

建議: Your answer is understandable but informal expressions like "wanna" should be avoided in IELTS. Also, try to use linking words to clarify your ideas and improve coherence. Avoid run-on sentences by breaking them into shorter ones.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list for my work. Instead, I keep my tasks in mind and create an imaginary note in my head, where I check off completed tasks. I prefer to keep it short and simple because it helps me feel happy and satisfied.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid informal language like "cause" and improve sentence structure for clarity.

範例: Some people might find making lists stressful because it constantly reminds them of their tasks. Additionally, it can be time-consuming to get in the mood to write everything down and to find paper and pen. Therefore, they prefer not to make lists.

建議: Your answer is good but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to contrast ideas clearly and avoid repetition. Also, be careful with prepositions and article usage.

範例: I actually prefer making old-school lists using paper and pen. However, since I always have my phone with me, it's easier to make lists on my phone. Moreover, I can easily add new items to my checklist whenever I remember them, so I usually use my phone for lists.

× In hindsight, I making a shopping list would probably help me shop more efficiently and avoid missing important things.

✓ In hindsight, making a shopping list would probably help me shop more efficiently and avoid missing important things.

The verb 'making' is incorrectly used with the subject 'I' without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is the gerund 'making' without 'I' before it, as it functions as the subject of the clause. Removing 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× I often end up wondering through aisles and hoping that the products will remind me.

✓ I often end up wandering through aisles and hoping that the products will remind me.

The word 'wondering' is a verb meaning to be curious or to think, but the intended meaning is to move around, which is 'wandering'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar tense error, but since 'wondering' is incorrect here, it is corrected to 'wandering'.

× I tend to keep what I wanna do in mind and I will create this imaginary note inside my head where I take off everything I've done and I tend to keep it really short and simple so I feel happy and satisfied.

✓ I tend to keep what I wanna do in mind and I create this imaginary note in my head where I tick off everything I've done and I tend to keep it really short and simple so I feel happy and satisfied.

The phrase 'inside my head' is less natural than 'in my head' when referring to mental notes. Also, 'take off' is incorrect in this context; the correct phrasal verb is 'tick off' meaning to mark tasks as completed.

× They might think it's stressful because it keeps reminding them of things they have to do and it might also be time consuming for them cause getting in the mood to write your tasks and having to find a paper or pen to write everything down just.

✓ They might think it's stressful because it keeps reminding them of things they have to do, and it might also be time-consuming for them because getting in the mood to write their tasks and having to find a paper or pen to write everything down is just annoying.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. 'Cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I actually prefer to make an old school list with using paper and pen, but since I always have my phone in hand and it's easier to make a list to your phone and whenever you remember a new item you can just easily add it to your checklist.

✓ I actually prefer to make an old school list using paper and pen, but since I always have my phone in hand, it's easier to make a list on your phone, and whenever you remember a new item, you can just easily add it to your checklist.

The phrase 'with using' is incorrect; it should be 'using' alone. Also, the correct preposition is 'on your phone' rather than 'to your phone' when referring to making a list digitally.