列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is very short and does not provide any supporting details. Try to give a complete response by explaining why you don't make a list when you shop, using linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, sometimes I make a list if I need to buy many items to avoid forgetting anything.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain how making lists helps you at work, using linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. Usually, I write down important tasks, and this method works well to remind me of deadlines and priorities.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contradicts the question. Instead, explain reasons why some people might dislike making lists, providing specific details and using linking words for clarity.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on memory. Additionally, they might feel that lists limit their flexibility during the day.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and does not explain your preference. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons, using linking words to make your answer more natural.

範例: I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easier to see everything at once. Moreover, writing by hand helps me remember tasks better than using my phone.

× Yes, I do. Usually I have sometimes.

✓ Yes, I do. Usually, I do sometimes.

The original sentence 'Usually I have sometimes' is grammatically incorrect because 'have' is not the appropriate verb here to express the frequency of making lists. The correct verb is 'do' to match the question about making lists. Also, adding a comma after 'Usually' improves clarity.

× Uh, because they help uh organize it and remember important tasks.

✓ Uh, because they help organize and remember important tasks.

The original sentence has unnecessary filler words 'uh' and the pronoun 'it' is unclear and unnecessary. Removing 'uh' and 'it' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct. The verb 'help' should be followed directly by the base verbs 'organize' and 'remember' without 'it'.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list on paper.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make lists on paper.

The question is about making lists in general, so the plural 'lists' is more appropriate than the singular 'a list'. Using 'lists' matches the general preference rather than a single instance.