列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains minor grammatical errors such as 'stuffs' instead of 'stuff' and 'return back' which is redundant. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy by combining ideas. Also, use linking words to improve coherence. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reasoning with supporting details.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, if I forget something, I simply return to the store to get it. I find making lists unnecessary and time-consuming.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details. Avoid informal phrases like 'You know' in formal speaking tests. Also, try to expand your answer slightly to show your ability to develop ideas coherently.

範例: I don't have a job currently, so I don't make lists for work. Regarding my school schedule, I prefer to go with the flow rather than planning everything in advance, which works well for me most of the time.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases such as 'relevant something to do' and 'making leads' instead of 'making lists'. Try to use clearer vocabulary and avoid filler phrases like 'as you know'. Also, provide more specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it unnecessary or time-consuming. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on memory or spontaneity. Ultimately, it depends on personal preference and habits.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains informal language like 'you know' and vague phrases such as 'every stuff'. Try to be more precise and formal. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain your preference clearly.

範例: I generally prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and efficient. Since technology is advancing rapidly, using digital tools helps me stay organized and save time.

× If I'm to shop, I just go to the store and buy my stuffs.

✓ If I'm to shop, I just go to the store and buy my stuff.

The word 'stuffs' is incorrect because 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'stuff' instead of 'stuffs' is grammatically correct.

× If I forget to get something, I just return back to the store and get it.

✓ If I forget to get something, I just return to the store and get it.

The word 'return' already implies going back, so adding 'back' is redundant and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'return to the store'.

× So no, I don't make a list before going to shop.

✓ So no, I don't make a list before going shopping.

The phrase 'going to shop' is incorrect; the correct gerund form is 'going shopping' when used after 'going'.

× I don't make any list for my work as far as school is concerned.

✓ I don't make any lists for my work as far as school is concerned.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because 'any' is used with plural countable nouns in negative sentences.

× You know, I just go with the flow and get on my day.

✓ You know, I just go with the flow and get on with my day.

The correct phrase is 'get on with my day' which means to continue or proceed with one's day. The preposition 'with' is necessary here.

× Some people don't like making lists because they don't see it as a relevant something to do.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they don't see it as a relevant thing to do.

The phrase 'a relevant something' is incorrect; 'thing' is the correct noun to use here.

× So there's really no specific reason why some people don't like making leads.

✓ So there's really no specific reason why some people don't like making lists.

The word 'leads' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'lists'.

× Generally, I prefer using my phone to do every stuff I want to do.

✓ Generally, I prefer using my phone to do every thing I want to do.

The phrase 'every stuff' is incorrect because 'stuff' is uncountable and cannot be used with 'every'. The correct phrase is 'everything'.