列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors to sound more natural.

範例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I have a sharp memory. However, if someone like my mother gives me a list, I use it to make sure I buy everything needed.

建議: Focus on answering the question directly and clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unclear phrases. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary will improve clarity.

範例: Sometimes I make a timetable, but I usually don't write lists for my work. Since I have a sharp memory, I can easily remember my tasks without writing them down.

建議: Clarify your ideas and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Provide specific reasons and avoid vague expressions to improve content quality.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. However, others make lists as reminders since their memory might not be very sharp.

建議: Try to organize your answer with clear linking words and correct grammar. Be concise and avoid unnecessary repetition to make your response more natural and effective.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and saves time. Also, when I'm outside without a pen or paper, I can easily write the list on my phone.

× I I having a sharp memory so I don't make a list.

✓ I have a sharp memory so I don't make a list.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'having' instead of the correct verb form 'have'. 'Having' is the present participle and cannot be used as the main verb here. The correct simple present tense verb 'have' should be used to express possession of a sharp memory.

× Moreover then like someone gave me a list like my mother gave me a list then I used to buy with that.

✓ Moreover, if someone gives me a list, like my mother did, then I use it to buy things.

The original sentence has confusing conjunctions and tense inconsistency. 'Moreover then like' is incorrect; 'if' is appropriate to express condition. Also, 'used to buy with that' is awkward; 'use it to buy things' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Like sometime I make a timetable but for my work I don't.

✓ Sometimes I make a timetable but for my work, I don't.

The word 'sometime' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, a comma after 'work' improves clarity.

× Like I never used to write on eternal copyright but I have to do my work so I have a sharp memory so I can easily remember what to do.

✓ I never used to write on external copyright, but I have to do my work, so I have a sharp memory and can easily remember what to do.

The phrase 'on eternal copyright' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Assuming 'external copyright' or another phrase was intended, 'on' may be incorrect depending on context. Also, the sentence is run-on and needs commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× As most of the people love to make notes because they are like their memories, not too much sharp or they wanted to put as a reminder.

✓ Most people love to make notes because their memories are not very sharp, or they want to use notes as reminders.

'As most of the people' is awkward; 'Most people' is better. 'Not too much sharp' is incorrect; 'not very sharp' is the correct expression. 'They wanted to put as a reminder' is incorrect; 'they want to use notes as reminders' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I love to make the list on my phone because it's convenient, it's a time saving.

✓ Yes, I love to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and time-saving.

'Make the list' should be 'make lists' to generalize. 'It's a time saving' is incorrect; 'time-saving' is an adjective and should be hyphenated and used without 'a'.

× Moreover, I didn't need any copy or plan to write sometime like we are outside.

✓ Moreover, I don't need any paper or pen to write sometimes when we are outside.

'Didn't need' is past tense inconsistent with context; 'don't need' is correct. 'Copy or plan' is incorrect; likely 'paper or pen' is intended. 'Sometime like we are outside' is awkward; 'sometimes when we are outside' is correct.

× We didn't have a pen so I can easily write it on my phone.

✓ If we don't have a pen, I can easily write it on my phone.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Changing to present tense 'If we don't have a pen' matches 'I can easily write'. Also, 'didn't have' is past tense, inconsistent with 'can'.