列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "to insure and to insure and to ensure" and focus on expressing your ideas clearly and concisely. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I buy only the important and necessary items. This helps me shop efficiently and avoid forgetting anything essential.

建議: Your answer is good but could be improved by using linking words to make it more coherent. Also, try to use plural forms correctly and avoid run-on sentences by breaking them into shorter ones.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because writing down tasks helps me concentrate on what I need to do during the day. After finishing all the tasks, I feel satisfied that I did my job well, and I know what to do tomorrow.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like "no enough time"; instead, say "not enough time."

範例: Some people might dislike making lists because they have a good memory and can organize tasks mentally. Others may not have enough time to write lists, especially if they do repetitive tasks. However, I find making lists more comfortable and it helps me stay organized.

建議: Your answer contains some repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly using linking words like "because" and "on the other hand." Also, avoid repeating phrases and finish your sentences properly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so there is no risk of losing the list. Moreover, it's very convenient to delete items on my phone, and I don't need to use paper.

× I always make a list when I shop to insure and to insure and to ensure by only important things and necessary things that I need and it's also helps me to shop efficiently not.

✓ I always make a list when I shop to ensure only important and necessary things that I need, and it also helps me to shop efficiently.

The original sentence has repeated phrases ('to insure and to insure and to ensure') and incorrect conjunction use ('and it's also helps me to shop efficiently not'). The correction removes repetition, uses 'ensure' correctly, and connects ideas properly with 'and'. Also, 'helps' should not be preceded by 'it's' but rather 'it' as the subject.

× after finishing all the task gives me satisfaction that I did well my job and I know what to do tomorrow.

✓ after finishing all the tasks gives me satisfaction that I did my job well and I know what to do tomorrow.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple tasks. Also, the phrase 'did well my job' is incorrect; it should be 'did my job well' to follow correct word order.

× Maybe they have no enough time to write down tasks and do the same things at the same time.

✓ Maybe they do not have enough time to write down tasks and do the same things at the same time.

The phrase 'no enough time' is incorrect. The correct quantifier usage is 'do not have enough time' or 'have no time'. The correction uses 'do not have enough time' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But for me it's more comfortable and more organized.

✓ But for me, it's more comfortable and more organized.

A comma is needed after 'for me' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause, improving sentence clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because there is no risk to lose the paper, because I always have my phone with me and on the other hand is very it's very comfortable to delete things on my phone and because I do not need paper and then.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because there is no risk of losing the paper, I always have my phone with me, and on the other hand, it is very comfortable to delete things on my phone, so I do not need paper.

The phrase 'risk to lose' is incorrect; it should be 'risk of losing'. The sentence also has run-on issues and awkward phrasing. The correction uses proper prepositions, adds commas for clarity, and restructures the sentence for better flow and grammatical correctness.