列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your sentences smoothly. Also, use contractions to sound more natural in spoken English.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list, especially before a ceremony, so I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: To be honest, I don't usually make lists for work, but if I have an important task coming up, I like to create a schedule so I can complete everything in order.

建議: Your answer shows understanding but contains grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas clearly.

範例: People have different preferences. Some like making lists because it helps reduce stress about the future; however, others find that making lists actually causes them stress.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit wordy and contains some awkward phrases. Try to be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid unnecessary words.

範例: Nowadays, with advanced technology, I prefer to make my lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can access them easily anytime.

× To be honest, me personally don't like to make a list for working, but if there is something important ahead, I would like to create and schedule so I can do anything in the order.

✓ To be honest, I personally don't like to make a list for working, but if there is something important ahead, I would like to create and schedule so I can do everything in order.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as the subject; it should be 'I'. Also, 'anything' is too general and should be 'everything' to indicate all tasks. Using correct subject pronouns is essential for grammatical accuracy.

× As you know, people are different. Some of them like to make a list because making a list avoid them from having stress about the future. On the other hand, some of the some of them don't like to do it because they cause them stress.

✓ As you know, people are different. Some of them like to make a list because making a list helps them avoid stress about the future. On the other hand, some of them don't like to do it because it causes them stress.

The phrase 'avoid them from having stress' is incorrect; it should be 'helps them avoid stress'. Also, 'they cause them stress' is unclear; 'it causes them stress' correctly refers to 'making a list'. Proper pronoun reference and verb agreement improve clarity.

× Nowadays we're living in a state-of-the-art technology that we can use our phone for every daily task.

✓ Nowadays we're living in a state-of-the-art technological era where we can use our phones for every daily task.

The phrase 'living in a state-of-the-art technology' is incorrect; 'technology' is uncountable and abstract. 'Technological era' or 'age' is more appropriate. Also, 'phone' should be plural 'phones' to generalize. Correct preposition and noun usage enhance meaning.

× So due to the this fact, I would like to write down my list in my phone because I like to have an easy access for them.

✓ So due to this fact, I would like to write down my list on my phone because I like to have easy access to it.

The phrase 'the this fact' is incorrect; only one article is needed ('this fact'). Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' as lists are written 'on' devices. 'An easy access' is incorrect because 'access' is uncountable; remove 'an'. 'For them' should be 'to it' referring to the list. Proper article and preposition use is necessary for correctness.