列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Absolutely yes, because I have a poor memory, so I must make a list when I go shopping. If I don't, I will forget all about what I want to buy, so I will make a list.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
I always make a list for my work because I have a poor memory so I must make a list to remind me about what I have to do and it works really well so.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
There are there may some key reasons. First, people may think they have good memories so that they needn't to make a list. Second, they are too lazy to make lists because it can take some time.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is time saving and convenient. If I make a list on the paper, it may use my pencil and paper that is occupied my time. So I prefer to make a list on my phone.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答较为自然且直接，但存在重复表达“make a list”，且句子结构较为简单。建议减少重复，使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I tend to forget items easily. Therefore, having a list helps me remember everything I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中重复使用“make a list”，句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，导致表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词提升连贯性。
範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks, and it works very well.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“needn't to make a list”，且开头重复“there are there may”。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达和连接词。
範例: There are a few reasons. Firstly, some people believe their memory is good enough, so they don't feel the need to make lists. Secondly, others find it time-consuming and prefer not to bother.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中表达不够自然，如“it may use my pencil and paper that is occupied my time”，且重复表达“prefer to make a list on my phone”。建议使用更地道的表达，避免重复。
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and saves time compared to writing on paper.
文法
× First, people may think they have good memories so that they needn't to make a list.
✓ First, people may think they have good memories so they needn't make a list.
在情态动词后面不需要加不定式的“to”，正确用法是“needn't make”，而不是“needn't to make”。
× If I make a list on the paper, it may use my pencil and paper that is occupied my time.
✓ If I make a list on paper, it may use my pencil and paper, which occupies my time.
“on the paper”应改为“on paper”，因为这里指的是一般的纸张，不是特定的某张纸。句子中“that is occupied my time”结构错误，应改为“which occupies my time”，使用关系代词和正确的动词形式。
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