列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "I usually don't make a list when I shop because I remember what I need." Then add a supporting detail with linking words.

範例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I remember what I need. However, sometimes I write a list if I have many items to buy to avoid forgetting anything.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to give a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, be specific about how making lists helps you.

範例: Yes, I make lists to manage my study tasks effectively. For example, I schedule breaks to recharge, which helps me stay focused and complete my work on time.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors and unclear ideas. Avoid negative assumptions like calling people lazy. Instead, give clear reasons with examples and use linking words to explain your points.

範例: Some people avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously. Consequently, they might forget tasks or feel less organized.

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant but contains some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are complete and logical. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, which is very convenient. Moreover, many apps help me organize tasks efficiently, so I can access my list anytime, making it easier to keep track of everything.

× To be to be honest, I didn't.

✓ To be honest, I didn't.

The phrase 'To be to be honest' contains a repetition error. Removing the extra 'to be' corrects the sentence. This is not a grammar problem type from the list but a redundancy issue, so no correction based on the list is applied here.

× I go to to the supermarket and remember what my mother told me to buy.

✓ I go to the supermarket and remember what my mother told me to buy.

The phrase 'to to the supermarket' contains a repeated preposition 'to'. Removing the extra 'to' corrects the sentence. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× I buy it 1 by 1.

✓ I buy them one by one.

The phrase 'I buy it 1 by 1' incorrectly uses 'it' for multiple items and uses a numeral '1' instead of the phrase 'one by one'. Correcting the pronoun to 'them' and spelling out 'one by one' improves clarity and correctness. This relates to quantifier and pronoun use (ID 14 and 12), but focusing on quantifier here.

× So I didn't. I have a good, I have a good remember.

✓ So I didn't. I have a good memory.

The phrase 'I have a good remember' incorrectly uses 'remember' as a noun. The correct noun is 'memory'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/adjectives (ID 12 or 13). Here, it's incorrect word choice (ID 13).

× Actually I don't know but I now now I am studying so I make a list to manage my time and community of my tasks.

✓ Actually, I don't know but now I am studying so I make a list to manage my time and completion of my tasks.

The phrase 'community of my tasks' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'completion'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or word choice (ID 13). Also, 'now now' is repeated; removing the repetition improves clarity.

× In addition, I I put a three a time to to recharge and relax.

✓ In addition, I put three times to recharge and relax.

The phrase 'put a three a time to to recharge' contains repeated prepositions and articles. Correcting to 'put three times to recharge' fixes the preposition and article errors (ID 11 and 22).

× There are many reasons some people do not make a list.

✓ There are many reasons why some people do not make a list.

The sentence lacks the conjunction 'why' to connect the clauses properly. Adding 'why' corrects the sentence structure (ID 26).

× Maybe that they are lazy or are not disciplined.

✓ Maybe they are lazy or not disciplined.

The phrase 'Maybe that they are lazy' is incorrect; 'that' is unnecessary here. Removing 'that' corrects the pronoun usage (ID 12).

× As a result they they not they will not be sacrificed and success they will face so many child.

✓ As a result, they will not be successful and will face many challenges.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. Correcting the sentence structure to express the intended meaning clearly addresses sentence structure errors (ID 26).

× I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have have it with me, so it's very convenient.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's very convenient.

The phrase 'have have it' contains a repeated verb. Removing the repetition corrects the pronoun usage (ID 12).

× This mistake is this. This makes this make it easier to keep track of everything.

✓ This makes it easier to keep track of everything.

The phrase 'This mistake is this.' is unclear and unnecessary. Removing it and correcting 'This makes this make' to 'This makes' fixes pronoun and sentence structure errors (ID 12 and 26).