列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to form a clear topic sentence and support it with a reason using linking words. For example, say 'Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy.'

範例: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

建議: Your answer has some hesitation and informal fillers. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, use correct grammar such as 'works very well' instead of 'works very good'.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they work very well because I have many exams and need to remember all my tasks clearly.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains mistakes. Avoid filler words and try to express your ideas clearly. Use linking words to explain reasons. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they are lazy or have a good memory and don't need them.'

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they might be lazy or they have a good memory, so they feel lists are unnecessary.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but has some awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar. For example, say 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy and I always have my phone with me, unlike paper.'

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me, so I can check my list anytime without carrying paper.

× Yes, I make list when I shop because it remembers it helps me.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, the phrase 'it remembers it helps me' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me remember' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I make lists for my work and it works very good because uh, I have many exams, uh, uh huh.

✓ Yes, I make lists for my work and it works very well because I have many exams.

The adverb 'well' should be used instead of the adjective 'good' to modify the verb 'works'. Also, filler words like 'uh' and 'uh huh' should be omitted for clarity.

× I think some people don't like making leads because they are lazy persons or they have good uh, remember.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they are lazy or have a good memory.

The word 'leads' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. 'Lazy persons' is unnatural; 'lazy' alone suffices. 'Have good remember' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have a good memory'.

× I don't know how is remember.

✓ I don't know how to remember.

The phrase 'how is remember' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'how to remember' to express the intended meaning.

× I prefer to make a list in my phone because it is easy and because I have my phone always and it is easy that you have paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy and I always have my phone with me, which is easier than having paper.

The correct preposition for devices like 'phone' is 'on' not 'in'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and naturalness.