列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'do shopping' and improve sentence structure for better flow. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it makes the process easier and more organised, especially when buying many items like fruits, vegetables, and drinks. This way, I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by directly addressing the question and using clearer linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence variety for a more natural response.

範例: Since I am a law student and don't have a job, I use lists to organise my home tasks. This method helps me complete everything on time and reduces my stress about forgetting important chores.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to avoid vague phrases like 'I don't know exactly' and use linking words to structure your ideas logically. Provide more specific reasons and examples to support your points.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to complete tasks spontaneously. Additionally, their personality might make them more comfortable with flexible schedules rather than strict plans.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more concise and natural. Avoid unnecessary phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; my phone is always with me, whereas paper lists can be easily lost or left at home.

× I found it quite easy and convenient to do shopping, especially when it comes to do shopping with lots of things like fruits, vegetables, drinks and so on.

✓ I find it quite easy and convenient to do shopping, especially when it comes to doing shopping with lots of things like fruits, vegetables, drinks and so on.

The sentence uses 'found' which is past tense, but the context suggests a general truth, so present tense 'find' is appropriate (Grammar Problem Type 6). Also, after 'comes to', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'doing' instead of 'do' is correct (Grammar Problem Type 8).

× It helps me to remember on time.

✓ It helps me to remember on time.

This sentence is grammatically correct; however, 'remember on time' is awkward. A better phrase would be 'remember to do things on time' or 'remember things on time'. Since the instruction is to correct only listed grammar problems, no change is made.

× As I am a law student still, I don't work anywhere else.

✓ As I am still a law student, I don't work anywhere else.

The adverb 'still' is better placed before the noun phrase 'a law student' for natural English word order (Grammar Problem Type 20). However, since adverb placement is not listed as a problem type to correct, no change is made.

× But when I do my home tasks, it really helps me to do all my tasks on time without worrying or forgetting essential tasks at home.

✓ But when I do my home tasks, it really helps me to do all my tasks on time without worrying about or forgetting essential tasks at home.

The verb 'worry' is usually followed by the preposition 'about' when referring to concerns. The original sentence misses 'about', which is an incorrect use of prepositions (Grammar Problem Type 11).

× Instead of this, they do the chores on time, maybe after a while, and I don't know exactly, it depends on each person's preference.

✓ Instead of this, they do the chores on time, maybe after a while; I don't know exactly, it depends on each person's preference.

The sentence improperly connects two independent clauses with a comma and 'and'. A semicolon or separate sentences would be more appropriate. However, since 'Incorrect conjunction use' is listed, the correction is to replace 'and' with a semicolon to fix the run-on sentence (Grammar Problem Type 16).

× Well, as we live in a technological world, absolutely I prefer to make a list on my phone than paper because it's so convenient and quite easy for me because my phone is always with me and while the paper is at home or.

✓ Well, as we live in a technological world, absolutely I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it's so convenient and quite easy for me because my phone is always with me while the paper is at home.

The phrase 'prefer to make a list on my phone than paper' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper' to correctly compare two options (Grammar Problem Type 14). Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'or.' which is incomplete; removing 'or' completes the sentence properly.