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Part 1

考官

Do you make a list when you shop?

考生

Well, it depends on what I want to buy and where I go shopping. If I want to buy some specific items, I will make a list to avoid forgetting anything important, but if I just wander around the supermarket I will buy whatever catch my eyes.

考官

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

考生

Definitely. I always make A to do list for my work. It can help me stay organized and let me know what I should do and when I should finish this task. It can improve my productivity and boost my sense of self-discipline.

考官

Why don't some people like making lists?

考生

Well, from my perspective, it depends on people's personality and the nature of the task. If the task is not very important, people can just remember it. Mentally. Making a list is unnecessary under this.

考官

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

考生

Well, I prefer making a list on paper writing my plain stone can help me organize what I should do and boast a sense of control myself and writing it down can not only.

評估

總分

總分: 6.0流暢度與連貫性: 6.0發音: 6.0文法: 5.5詞彙: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

分數: 75.0

建議: 你的回答较为自然且内容完整,但句子结构稍显复杂,且部分表达不够准确,如“whatever catch my eyes”应为“whatever catches my eye”。建议简化句子结构,注意主谓一致,并使用更准确的表达。

範例: It depends on what I need to buy and where I shop. If I have specific items in mind, I make a list to avoid forgetting them. However, if I just browse the supermarket, I buy whatever catches my eye.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

分數: 80.0

建議: 回答内容清晰且结构合理,但有小的语法错误,如“make A to do list”应为“make a to-do list”。建议注意冠词使用和连字符的正确写法,同时可以增加一些连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Definitely. I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and reminds me of deadlines. This improves my productivity and boosts my self-discipline.

Why don't some people like making lists?

分數: 70.0

建議: 回答表达有些断裂,如“Mentally.”单独成句不自然。建议将句子连贯起来,避免断句,且用词更准确。可以增加具体例子或原因使内容更丰富。

範例: Well, from my perspective, it depends on people's personality and the task's importance. If the task is not very important, people might prefer to remember it mentally because making a list seems unnecessary.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

分數: 50.0

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱,存在语法和拼写错误,如“plain stone”应为“plain stone”可能是拼写错误,且句子未完成。建议练习完整表达,注意拼写和语法,确保句子通顺且完整。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me organize my tasks and gives me a sense of control. It also helps me remember better than using my phone.

文法

Verb in the present participle form

× If I just wander around the supermarket I will buy whatever catch my eyes.

If I just wander around the supermarket I will buy whatever catches my eyes.

动词catch在这里作为第三人称单数主语的谓语动词,需加-s变为catches,表示主谓一致。

Article errors

× I always make A to do list for my work.

I always make a to-do list for my work.

英文中不定冠词a应为小写,且to do list应写作to-do list,表示“待办事项清单”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Well, I prefer making a list on paper writing my plain stone can help me organize what I should do and boast a sense of control myself and writing it down can not only.

Well, I prefer making a list on paper. Writing my plan down can help me organize what I should do and boost a sense of control over myself, and writing it down can not only...

原句中“writing my plain stone”应为“writing my plan down”,表达“写下我的计划”;boast应为boost,意为“提升”;句子结构混乱,需分句并调整词序,使表达清晰。

重點詞彙

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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