列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid repeating words like 'sometimes' and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I don't usually make a list when I shop, but sometimes I do. For example, when I need to buy things for my house, I write a list to remember what I need. This helps me avoid forgetting important items.

建議: Provide a clearer and more complete answer. Use proper tense and explain your habits with some reasons. Adding linking words will improve coherence.

範例: I have never made a list for my work because I prefer to handle tasks as they come. However, I think making a list could help me organize my work better.

建議: Make your answer more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

範例: I don't like making lists because it takes too much time. Moreover, I often start a list but then I lose interest and stop using it.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by adding a topic sentence and linking words. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper. This is because I often lose paper lists, and it's much easier to find my phone when I need to check the list.

× I do a list sometimes to help me know what I want or what I need on my house.

✓ I make a list sometimes to help me know what I want or what I need in my house.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect because 'list' is a countable noun and the correct verb collocation is 'make a list'. Also, the preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to something inside a house.

× I never did a list for my work.

✓ I have never made a list for my work.

The sentence requires the present perfect tense 'have never made' to indicate an experience up to now. Also, 'did a list' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'made a list'.

× I just go work, take a rest and come work again.

✓ I just go to work, take a rest, and come back to work again.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before 'work'. Also, 'come work again' is incomplete; it should be 'come back to work again' to indicate returning.

× I think it's taking much of my time and when I start the list I never continue at it.

✓ I think it takes much of my time, and when I start the list, I never continue it.

The phrase 'it's taking much of my time' is better expressed as 'it takes much of my time' to indicate a general fact. Also, 'continue at it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'continue it'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always miss the paper and it's hard to find it again.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always lose the paper, and it's hard to find it again.

The verb 'miss' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'lose' when referring to misplacing something. The rest of the sentence is correct.