列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of "I usually make the list for the shopping items or I can make the list for my brother," say "I usually make a shopping list for myself or my brother." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list for myself or sometimes for my brother. I send it to him via message so he knows what to buy. If not, I jot down notes on my phone to keep track of the items.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and using more natural expressions. For example, say "I use sticky notes to list my tasks at work, which I stick to my PC so I can see them clearly. This helps me remember what I need to do." Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence flow with linking words.

範例: Yes, I use sticky notes to list my tasks at work, which I stick to my PC so I can see them clearly. This visual reminder helps me remember my duties whenever I work on my computer.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Avoid repeating words and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I think some people have an excellent memory, so they don't need lists. However, I tend to forget things, so I always make a list to help me remember."

範例: I think some people have an excellent memory, so they don't need to make lists. However, I tend to forget things easily, so I always make a list to help me remember what to buy.

建議: Your answer is hesitant and contains many fillers which affect fluency. Try to speak more confidently and clearly. Also, complete your sentences and use linking words. For example, "I prefer to make lists on paper when it's convenient to carry it with me. Otherwise, I usually use the notes app on my phone because it's easy and always accessible."

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper when it's convenient to carry it with me. Otherwise, I usually use the notes app on my phone because it's easy and always accessible.

× Otherwise I do the notes over the phone also.

✓ Otherwise, I also take notes over the phone.

The phrase 'do the notes' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'take notes'. Using 'take notes' is the proper verb phrase to describe writing or recording notes. Also, adding a comma after 'Otherwise' improves sentence clarity.

× I send the message to him so that he can bring the items what we want.

✓ I send the message to him so that he can bring the items that we want.

The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrectly used here. The correct relative pronoun to refer to 'items' is 'that'. 'What' is not used as a relative pronoun in this context.

× I usually make the list for the shopping items or I can make the list for my brother.

✓ I usually make a list of the shopping items or I can make a list for my brother.

The article 'the' before 'list' is incorrect when referring to a general list. Using 'a list' is appropriate. Also, 'for the shopping items' should be 'of the shopping items' to correctly express the content of the list.

× I use the sticky notes for my list of works at work.

✓ I use sticky notes for my list of tasks at work.

'Sticky notes' is plural and should not have 'the' unless referring to specific notes. Also, 'list of works' is incorrect; 'tasks' is a better word to describe work items. 'At work' is correct.

× I usually stick that notes to my PC so that I can clearly see the visual of that list.

✓ I usually stick those notes to my PC so that I can clearly see the visual of that list.

'That notes' is incorrect because 'notes' is plural and requires the plural demonstrative pronoun 'those'.

× Whenever I work on on my PC it helps me a lot to remember that.

✓ Whenever I work on my PC, it helps me a lot to remember that.

There is a repeated preposition 'on on' which is a typographical error. Also, a comma after the introductory clause improves readability.

× But in my case I I always forget forgot the items to get purchased, so that's why I make the list.

✓ But in my case, I always forget the items to purchase, so that's why I make the list.

The phrase 'forget forgot' is incorrect; only one verb is needed. 'Forget' is present tense and fits the context better. Also, 'to get purchased' is awkward; 'to purchase' is more natural. Adding a comma after 'case' improves clarity.

× Sometimes, umm, when it's easy to, uh, get the paper along with me, umm, I uh, prefer to do the list on the paper.

✓ Sometimes, umm, when it's easy to, uh, bring the paper with me, umm, I uh, prefer to make the list on paper.

The phrase 'get the paper along with me' is incorrect; 'bring the paper with me' is the correct expression. Also, 'do the list' should be 'make the list'. 'On the paper' is better as 'on paper' in this context.

× Otherwise, most of the times I use my uh, notes in my mobile phone to get the list uh, to be written, uh, which is very easy to whenever I.

✓ Otherwise, most of the time I use my notes on my mobile phone to write the list, which is very easy whenever I need to.

'Most of the times' should be 'most of the time' as 'time' is uncountable here. 'Notes in my mobile phone' should be 'notes on my mobile phone'. The phrase 'to get the list to be written' is awkward; 'to write the list' is clearer. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity.