Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Actually, not very often. As for me, when I go to the grocery, I just look around and around to find everything I want.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yeah, I tried to make a list when I was work and I think it's very useful. It can Remember Me, remind me what things I have to do next.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think maybe they think making list is very waste of time. Maybe.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer to make lists on phones because I think phones is more convenient. You can use your notes or other applications to set your list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答时应更直接地回应问题,并避免重复表达。例如,可以先明确回答是否做购物清单,然后简要说明原因。
範例: I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse the store and pick up items as I go.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中语法错误较多,且表达不够自然。建议使用正确时态和更流畅的表达方式,同时避免拼写错误。
範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember the tasks I need to complete next.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答缺乏具体细节,且表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词丰富内容,并提供更具体的理由。
範例: Some people might dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time and prefer to rely on memory instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答较为清晰,但语法和用词需改进。建议注意主谓一致,并使用更自然的表达。
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I can use apps like Notes to organize my tasks easily.
× Yeah, I tried to make a list when I was work and I think it's very useful.
✓ Yeah, I tried to make a list when I was working and I think it's very useful.
这里的 'was work' 是错误的,应该用动名词形式 'working' 来表示进行时态,表示当时正在工作。
× It can Remember Me, remind me what things I have to do next.
✓ It can remind me what things I have to do next.
'Remember Me' 这里不合适,应该用 'remind me',因为提醒某人用 'remind',而不是 'remember'。
× I think maybe they think making list is very waste of time.
✓ I think maybe they think making lists is a waste of time.
'making list' 应该用复数 'making lists',因为泛指多次制作清单;'waste of time' 前需要加不定冠词 'a'。
× I prefer to make lists on phones because I think phones is more convenient.
✓ I prefer to make lists on phones because I think phones are more convenient.
'phones' 是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are',而不是单数 'is'。