列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes I do, because making a list can make me know how to get and where to get my needs in a more convenient and quicker way. And also making a list can let me feel more clear and certain.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes I do because making a list from my work can let my work be very clear. And it does work because every time I make a list I done my work quickly and efficiently. This can also help me with many things such as doing exercises and shopping.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think the the reason that people doesn't like making lists is because they don't want to be on, don't want to be organized, and they want to organize themselves. When they are willing to do anything, they do it immediately, not by listening it out.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
In my opinion, I prefer to make a list on paper because in my phone there is other apps that may attract me and I won't be very put on my thoughts on the list. Well, in paper I can concentrate on the list and the things I need to do.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 70.0建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较为重复，且部分表达不够地道。建议简化句子，避免重复使用“making a list can”，并使用更自然的表达方式。
範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me find what I need quickly and keeps me organized.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I done my work”，且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态使用，并用连接词使句子更流畅。
範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized. As a result, I can complete tasks quickly and efficiently. I also use lists for other activities like exercising and shopping.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“don't want to be on”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，表达原因时更具体。
範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and do things immediately rather than planning ahead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中表达不够自然，且有语法错误，如“won't be very put on my thoughts”。建议简化表达，使用更自然的句型。
範例: I prefer making lists on paper because my phone has many apps that distract me. Writing on paper helps me focus better on my tasks.
文法
× I think the the reason that people doesn't like making lists is because they don't want to be on, don't want to be organized, and they want to organize themselves.
✓ I think the reason that people don't like making lists is because they don't want to be on, don't want to be organized, and they want to organize themselves.
主语people是复数，谓语动词should用复数形式don't而不是doesn't。这里的错误是主谓一致错误。
× And it does work because every time I make a list I done my work quickly and efficiently.
✓ And it does work because every time I make a list I do my work quickly and efficiently.
句中表达的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时do，而不是过去式done。done是过去分词，不能单独作为谓语。
× I think the the reason that people doesn't like making lists is because they don't want to be on, don't want to be organized, and they want to organize themselves.
✓ I think the reason that people don't like making lists is because they don't want to be organized, and they want to organize themselves.
短语'don't want to be on'不符合语法，可能是想表达不想被约束或不想被组织，正确表达应去掉'on'，直接用'don't want to be organized'。
× In my opinion, I prefer to make a list on paper because in my phone there is other apps that may attract me and I won't be very put on my thoughts on the list.
✓ In my opinion, I prefer to make a list on paper because on my phone there are other apps that may attract me and I won't be able to focus my thoughts on the list.
介词用错，应该用'on my phone'而不是'in my phone'。另外，'won't be very put on my thoughts'表达不正确，改为'won't be able to focus my thoughts'更符合语境。
× In my opinion, I prefer to make a list on paper because in my phone there is other apps that may attract me and I won't be very put on my thoughts on the list.
✓ In my opinion, I prefer to make a list on paper because on my phone there are other apps that may attract me and I won't be able to focus my thoughts on the list.
主语apps是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are，而不是单数is。
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