列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and lacks a direct response to the question. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add supporting details. Also, avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list because my parents often do the shopping for me. However, sometimes when I shop myself, I do make a list to stay organized and save time.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating the same phrases. Also, provide more specific details about how making a list helps you.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me avoid procrastination and stay focused. Moreover, it allows me to manage my time effectively and complete tasks on schedule.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is incomplete and contains some grammar mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to connect your points. Also, be more specific and clear in your explanations.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous way to organize tasks. Additionally, lists can cause stress if someone feels pressured to complete everything, especially for those who value flexibility.

建議: Your answer expresses your preference clearly but has some grammar errors and redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing. Moreover, I find it more personal and less distracting than using a phone screen.

× Usually I do not go for something, it's a job for my mom as well As for my dad as I'm a student and I'm so busy I can't have time for such things like shopping.

✓ Usually I do not go shopping, it's a job for my mom as well as for my dad because I'm a student and I'm so busy I don't have time for such things like shopping.

The phrase 'go for something' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, 'as well As for my dad' should be 'as well as for my dad' to correctly connect the ideas. Additionally, 'can't have time' should be 'don't have time' to express lack of time properly.

× But sometimes when I want to do this.

✓ But sometimes I want to do this.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or clause after 'when'. Removing 'when' makes it a complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× Some people dislike making this because they find it restrictive and prefer more spontaneous approach to organizing their task.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their tasks.

The word 'this' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' to refer to the activity. Also, 'more spontaneous approach' needs an article 'a' before it, and 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.

× Additionally, some may feel at least at unnecessary pressure or stress, especially if they struggle for complete all the attempts.

✓ Additionally, some may feel unnecessary pressure or stress, especially if they struggle to complete all the tasks.

The phrase 'feel at least at unnecessary pressure' is incorrect; it should be 'feel unnecessary pressure'. Also, 'struggle for complete all the attempts' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'struggle to complete all the tasks'.

× For example, a person who enjoys A flexibility might see.

✓ For example, a person who enjoys flexibility might see it differently.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'it differently' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I prefer make a list on paper as I love the feeling of touching paper and it's so so special for me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper as I love the feeling of touching paper and it's very special to me.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb: 'prefer to make'. Also, 'so so special' is informal and redundant; 'very special' is more appropriate. 'Special for me' should be 'special to me' to use the correct preposition.

× I do not like umm screen so so I prefer make a list on the paper.

✓ I do not like the screen, so I prefer to make a list on paper.

'Umm' is a filler and should be omitted in formal speech. 'Screen' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' as the general medium.