列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。また、文を簡潔にし、冗長な表現を避けることが重要です。

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I like to choose items spontaneously based on what I see in the store.

建議: 文法の誤りと意味の不明瞭さがあります。過去形と現在形の使い分けに注意し、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。より自然な表現で、効果を具体的に説明しましょう。

範例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because I tend to forget tasks. Making a list helps me stay organized and improves my productivity.

建議: 理由の説明が曖昧で、文の構造も不自然です。理由を明確にし、接続詞を使って論理的に説明する練習をしましょう。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do tasks spontaneously rather than following a fixed plan.

建議: 表現が混乱しており、理由がはっきり伝わっていません。理由を簡潔に述べ、繰り返しや冗長な表現を避けることが大切です。

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because using my phone can be distracting when I am working.

× No I don't because when I was in a shop I want to buy a different item that I don't think I will I buy.

✓ No, I don't because when I am in a shop, I want to buy different items that I don't think I will buy.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with present tense 'want' and an incorrect future tense structure 'I will I buy'. The correct tense for habitual actions is present tense. Also, 'a different item' should be plural 'different items' to match the context.

× When I was smoking, I usually forget to forget to do the thing I want to do.

✓ When I was working, I usually forgot to do the things I wanted to do.

The word 'smoking' is likely a typo for 'working'. The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match 'was working'. Also, 'forget to forget to do' is redundant and incorrect. 'The thing' should be plural 'the things' to match the context.

× So by making a list for my work, my work is very good become very good.

✓ So by making a list for my work, my work becomes much better.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and redundancy. 'My work is very good become very good' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper verb form and clearer expression.

× It is because some people like to do the things that they want to do in those time, so some people don't like making the list.

✓ It is because some people like to do the things they want to do at that time, so some people don't like making lists.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'those time'; it should be 'at that time'. Also, 'making the list' should be 'making lists' for generalization.

× I prefer to make a list on paper. It is because I I make a list on your on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because when I make a list on my phone,

The sentence has repeated 'I' and incorrect pronoun 'your' instead of 'my'. The sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Sometimes I sometimes it disturb me to do work to disturb me working.

✓ Sometimes it disturbs me and distracts me from working.

The sentence has repeated 'sometimes' and incorrect verb forms 'disturb me to do work to disturb me working'. The corrected sentence places adverbs properly and uses correct verb forms.