列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is good but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, be more concise and natural in your expression. For example, instead of repeating 'I made a list' and 'it helps', combine ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and focused. For instance, yesterday I bought groceries and household items using my list, which prevented me from buying unnecessary things.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to clarify what 'list of tags' means and complete your last sentence. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details. Also, avoid grammatical errors and incomplete thoughts.

範例: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and focused. For example, on busy days, I list my tasks by priority, which helps me complete them before the deadline and create a good impression on my supervisors.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using smoother linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to be more concise.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer the freedom to make decisions spontaneously. For instance, without a list, they can buy whatever they want without limitations.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but contains some repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words and more natural expressions. Also, avoid repeating words like 'there is' and improve sentence structure.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because we live in a digital age. Since almost everyone carries a phone everywhere, it's easier and more convenient to use it for making lists.

× Yes, I always make a list when I go for shopping.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go shopping' is correct without the preposition 'for'. Using 'go for shopping' is incorrect in English. The verb 'go' is directly followed by the gerund 'shopping' to indicate the activity.

× For example, yesterday I went for shopping groceries and all the household items.

✓ For example, yesterday I went shopping for groceries and all the household items.

The correct expression is 'go shopping for' something. 'Went for shopping groceries' is incorrect because 'shopping' should be used as a gerund after 'go', and the preposition 'for' should come before the object 'groceries'.

× It also helps me to prevent buying unnecessary things.

✓ It also helps me prevent buying unnecessary things.

The verb 'help' is followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to' in this context. Using 'helps me to prevent' is acceptable but less common; 'helps me prevent' is more natural and concise.

× It helps me to complete my tasks before deadline.

✓ It helps me complete my tasks before the deadline.

The phrase 'before deadline' is missing the definite article 'the'. In English, 'deadline' is a specific time, so 'the deadline' is required.

× It helps to create good impression on.

✓ It helps to create a good impression.

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'Create good impression on' lacks an object after 'on'. The correct phrase is 'create a good impression' without 'on' unless specifying whom the impression is on.

× I think some people don't like making a list because they feel it is restrictive and they might feel comfortable and sense of freedom taking decision moment by moment.

✓ I think some people don't like making a list because they feel it is restrictive and they might feel comfortable and have a sense of freedom by making decisions moment by moment.

The original sentence lacks proper verb forms and articles. 'Sense of freedom taking decision' is incorrect; it should be 'have a sense of freedom by making decisions'. Also, 'decision' should be plural 'decisions' to match 'moment by moment'.

× For instance, if they don't have this, they can buy anything without being limited.

✓ For instance, if they don't have this, they can buy anything without limitations.

The phrase 'without being limited' is awkward here. Using 'without limitations' is more natural and grammatically correct to express freedom from restrictions.

× I always prefer to make a list on my phone because this is the digital age.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone because we are in the digital age.

The phrase 'this is the digital age' is less natural in this context. Using 'we are in the digital age' better expresses the current time period relevant to the speaker and listener.

× For example, if we see there is a there is a cell phone in everyone's hand and they carry phone everywhere we go, it is easier and convenient to use.

✓ For example, if we see there is a cell phone in everyone's hand and they carry their phone everywhere they go, it is easier and more convenient to use.

The sentence has repetition ('there is a there is a'), missing possessive pronoun ('their phone'), and missing subject in the second clause ('they go'). Also, 'more convenient' is the correct comparative form to pair with 'easier'.