列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "something which you need to buy", bạn nên nói rõ các món đồ bạn thường mua. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "foods" mà nên dùng "food".

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. For example, I write down essential items like fresh vegetables, fruits, and bottled water to make sure I don't forget anything.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì "anything works which need to do", bạn nên nói "tasks I need to complete". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list at the beginning of my workday. This helps me remember the tasks I need to complete, so I don't forget anything important. As a result, I can work more efficiently and save time.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có thể thêm liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Bạn cũng nên dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn và tránh lặp từ như "don't like" nhiều lần.

範例: In my opinion, some people avoid making lists because they find it boring and believe it takes too much time. Therefore, they prefer to rely on memory instead.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lỗi như "handle text on my phone" và "run run tough tough battery". Hãy dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung lý do cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because I enjoy writing by hand. Moreover, it's easier to check my list when my phone's battery is low or dead.

× When I go shopping I usually make a list about something which you need to buy such as foods, water and anything else.

✓ When I go shopping I usually make a list of things that I need to buy such as food, water, and anything else.

The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition to indicate the content of a list is 'of'. Also, 'something which you need to buy' is changed to 'things that I need to buy' to maintain consistency in pronouns and plurality. 'Foods' is generally uncountable in this context, so 'food' is preferred.

× When I go shopping I usually make a list about something which you need to buy such as foods, water and anything else.

✓ When I go shopping I usually make a list of things that I need to buy such as food, water, and anything else.

The word 'foods' is generally uncountable when referring to types of food collectively, so 'food' is more appropriate here.

× When I go shopping I usually make a list about something which you need to buy such as foods, water and anything else.

✓ When I go shopping I usually make a list of things that I need to buy such as food, water, and anything else.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used in a personal statement; it should be 'I' to reflect the speaker's own needs.

× This helps me remember anything works which need to do so I don't forget anything important.

✓ This helps me remember any tasks I need to do so I don't forget anything important.

The phrase 'anything works which need to do' is incorrect; 'works' is not used in this context. 'Tasks' is the correct plural noun, and 'any' is used instead of 'anything' to refer to countable items.

× This helps me remember anything works which need to do so I don't forget anything important.

✓ This helps me remember any tasks I need to do so I don't forget anything important.

The phrase 'which need to do' is incorrect; it should be 'I need to do' to correctly express the action.

× It also helps my work more effectively and saves me time.

✓ It also helps me work more effectively and saves me time.

The phrase 'helps my work' is incorrect; the verb 'help' should be followed by the base verb 'work' to indicate the action the speaker performs.

× In my opinion, I prefer making a list on paper rather than handle text on my phone because I simply like write this text on paper.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer making a list on paper rather than handling text on my phone because I simply like to write this text on paper.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form 'handling' after 'rather than'. Also, 'like write' is incorrect; it should be 'like to write' or 'like writing'.

× It also helps me to check my list easily when my phone run run tough tough battery.

✓ It also helps me to check my list easily when my phone runs out of battery.

The phrase 'run run tough tough battery' is incorrect and likely a typo. The correct expression is 'runs out of battery' to indicate the phone's battery is depleted.

× It also helps me to check my list easily when my phone run run tough tough battery.

✓ It also helps me to check my list easily when my phone runs out of battery.

The verb 'run' should be in the third person singular form 'runs' to agree with the singular subject 'my phone'.