列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive with phrases like 'I make a list' and 'so that I don't forget'. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget small items. Therefore, I focus on listing important things to ensure I don't miss them.

建議: Your answer is relevant and structured but contains some repetition and minor grammar errors. Try to avoid repeating words like 'to' and use linking words to improve flow.

範例: Yes, every morning I make a to-do list to remember important meetings and deadlines. This method helps me stay organized and meet my responsibilities effectively.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has repeated words and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they consider it a waste of time and often fail to follow them, so they see lists as unimportant.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases and repetition. Also, 'iTunes' seems out of context. Try to clarify your points, avoid repeating words, and use linking words for coherence.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's quick and I always have it with me, so I am less likely to lose my list compared to paper.

× So mostly I make list of important items that I want to buy so that I don't forget them.

✓ So mostly I make a list of important items that I want to buy so that I don't forget them.

The noun 'list' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. Omitting the article causes a singular and plural issue.

× Yes, I usually make A to do list each and every morning when I get to work so that I don't forget any important meetings that I have to attend on that day or any deadlines that I have that I need to to meet.

✓ Yes, I usually make a to-do list each and every morning when I get to work so that I don't forget any important meetings that I have to attend on that day or any deadlines that I have that I need to meet.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' as it is in the middle of the sentence. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to be correct. Additionally, the repeated word 'to' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× So I I believe in To Do List.

✓ So I believe in the to-do list.

The phrase 'To Do List' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify the concept. Also, 'To Do List' should be in lowercase and hyphenated as 'to-do list'. The repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× I believe people don't like making lists because they they think it is a waste of their time and they never really follow that list.

✓ I believe people don't like making lists because they think it is a waste of their time and they never really follow that list.

The repeated word 'they' is a typographical error and should be removed for correct grammar and clarity.

× So they they think making that list it's not important.

✓ So they think making that list is not important.

The repeated 'they' is a typographical error and should be removed. Also, 'it's' (it is) should be replaced with 'is' to avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow.

× I prefer making a list on my phone. iTunes not time consuming and I have my phone everywhere I I can misplace it.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone. It is not time consuming and I have my phone everywhere, so I cannot misplace it.

The word 'iTunes' is incorrect here; it should be 'It is' or 'It's'. The repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'so' to connect the ideas logically.

× Unlike the paper, I can misplace it anytime.

✓ Unlike paper, I can misplace it anytime.

The definite article 'the' before 'paper' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.