列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc. Bạn nên nói trực tiếp về việc bạn có làm danh sách khi đi mua sắm và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to plan what I need to buy. It helps me avoid forgetting items and prevents me from buying things I don't need.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích cụ thể hơn về cách danh sách giúp bạn quản lý thời gian và cảm giác của bạn khi sử dụng nó.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work and study schedule. It helps me manage my time effectively and stay focused, so I feel more comfortable and less stressed.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to manage their time effectively, and they often ignore their plans, choosing to do things spontaneously instead.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient and helps me remember things more accurately.

× Yes definitely, I often make the list to plan some what something I want to buy and it's help me to determine exactly and do not buy wrong.

✓ Yes definitely, I often make a list to plan what I want to buy and it helps me to determine exactly and not buy the wrong items.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'make the list' should be 'make a list' because it is a general statement, and 'some what something' is incorrect and should be 'what'. 'Do not buy wrong' is awkward; it should be 'not buy the wrong items' for clarity.

× Yes, absolutely. I often plan my schedule for studying so it helps me to stay all night and also help me to manage my time well and I can feel comfortable.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I often plan my schedule for studying so it helps me to stay up all night and also helps me to manage my time well and I can feel comfortable.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'stay all night' is incomplete; 'stay up all night' is the correct phrase.

× Because some people do not know how to manage time effectively and they often careless about their plan and they do whatever they think right now.

✓ Because some people do not know how to manage time effectively and they are often careless about their plans and do whatever they think is right at the moment.

'Careless' is an adjective and should be used with a form of 'to be' (are careless). 'Plan' should be plural 'plans' to match the context. 'Do whatever they think right now' is incomplete; it should be 'do whatever they think is right at the moment' for clarity.

× And yes, absolutely. And I think it's so convenient and very beneficial for me. And also it's helped me to remember exactly. And I often make a list on the phone to remind me better.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I think it's very convenient and beneficial for me. It also helps me to remember things exactly. I often make a list on my phone to remind me better.

Starting sentences with 'And' repeatedly is incorrect conjunction use and makes the speech unnatural. 'It's helped' should be 'it helps' to maintain present tense consistency. 'On the phone' should be 'on my phone' for clarity.