列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural phrasing and clarity. Try to use the present simple tense correctly and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I don't make a shopping list when I go shopping because I don't find it useful."

範例: I don't make a shopping list when I go shopping because I don't find it useful.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your thoughts more naturally. For example, "Yes, I make a list for my work, especially at the end of the month. It helps me plan my tasks and share my progress with my team, which I find very useful."

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, especially at the end of the month. It helps me plan my tasks and share my progress with my team, which I find very useful.

建議: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words. For example, "I'm not sure why some people dislike making lists, but I think lists help a lot. When people have a list, it's easier to remember tasks or shopping items, which reduces stress and nervousness."

範例: I'm not sure why some people dislike making lists, but I think lists help a lot. When people have a list, it's easier to remember tasks or shopping items, which reduces stress and nervousness.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer sentence structure and linking words. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always have my phone with me, whether I'm out or at the office, so it's easier to keep track of my tasks."

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always have my phone with me, whether I'm out or at the office, so it's easier to keep track of my tasks.

× No, I am not doing shopping list when I go to the shopping because I think this is not useful.

✓ No, I do not make a shopping list when I go shopping because I think it is not useful.

The phrase 'am not doing shopping list' is incorrect because 'do' is the correct verb to use here, not the continuous form 'am doing'. Also, 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The verb 'do' is used for activities like making lists, and the simple present tense fits the habitual action described.

× Yes, I am doing a list of my work because I'm going end of the month.

✓ Yes, I am making a list of my work because I'm going at the end of the month.

The verb 'doing' is not appropriate with 'a list'; 'making' is the correct verb collocation. Also, 'going end of the month' is missing the preposition 'at' before 'the end of the month'.

× Yes, I am doing a list of my work because I'm going end of the month.

✓ Yes, I am making a list of my work because I'm going at the end of the month.

The phrase 'going end of the month' lacks the preposition 'at' which is necessary to indicate a specific time. The correct phrase is 'going at the end of the month'.

× I have what to do plan of my job and I'm going to share my working and I think this is more useful.

✓ I have a plan of what to do for my job and I'm going to share my work, and I think this is more useful.

The phrase 'I have what to do plan' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'I have a plan of what to do'. Also, 'my working' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'my work'.

× I don't have a clue but I don't have clue but I think making least they help ping so much when they have list it's more easy to tell our works or some buy something because they are.

✓ I don't have a clue, but I think making lists helps so much because when they have a list, it's easier to tell our work or buy something because they are prepared.

The phrase 'making least they help ping' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists helps'. Also, 'it's more easy' should be 'it's easier'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× If you forget something you don't have nervous, you don't have stress and this is more useful.

✓ If you forget something, you don't get nervous, you don't have stress, and this is more useful.

The phrase 'you don't have nervous' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'you don't get nervous'. 'Nervous' is an adjective and needs a verb like 'get' to form the correct expression.

× I prefer make list on my phone because it's more comfortable when I go somewhere or when our office my phone is always with me and I'm trying to do all best in my work and also when I have something in mobile phone it's more comfortable for me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more comfortable when I go somewhere or when I'm at the office; my phone is always with me and I'm trying to do my best in my work. Also, when I have something on my mobile phone, it's more comfortable for me.

The phrase 'I prefer make list' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer to make a list'. Also, 'when our office' is incorrect; it should be 'when I'm at the office'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.