列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, say "Yes, I usually make a shopping list to remember what I need to buy."

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store so I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question and explain your opinion clearly with supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to focus on improving my skills and handling tasks as they come. I find that making lists sometimes limits my flexibility.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to organize your answer. For example, explain why some people might dislike making lists.

範例: Some people might not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously without strict plans.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear preference and explain your reasons with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, and it's convenient to add or check items anytime, whether I'm shopping or working.

× Yes, I made at least when I go to the shopping because every time I write what I need because I am going to don't forget my topics, which ones I need.

✓ Yes, I make a list at least when I go shopping because every time I write what I need so I don't forget the items I need.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'made' with present tense 'go' and uses incorrect negative form 'am going to don't forget'. The correction uses present tense 'make' to match the habitual action, removes unnecessary articles, and corrects the negative form to 'don't forget'. This improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I made at least when I go to the shopping because every time I write what I need because I am going to don't forget my topics, which ones I need.

✓ Yes, I make a list at least when I go shopping because every time I write what I need so I don't forget the items I need.

The phrase 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' is an uncountable noun here and does not require 'to the'. The correct phrase is 'go shopping'. Removing 'to the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, I made at least when I go to the shopping because every time I write what I need because I am going to don't forget my topics, which ones I need.

✓ Yes, I make a list at least when I go shopping because every time I write what I need so I don't forget the items I need.

The phrase 'my topics, which ones I need' is unclear and incorrectly uses 'topics' and 'which ones'. It should be 'the items I need' to clearly refer to the things the speaker wants to remember. This correction improves clarity and pronoun use.

× No, I know it's a list of my work because I don't think it's useful for a reason.

✓ No, I don't have a list for my work because I don't think it's useful for a reason.

The original sentence uses 'know' incorrectly and 'a list of my work' is awkward. Also, 'for a reason' is vague. The correction changes 'know' to 'don't have' to express absence of a list and clarifies the sentence structure.

× No, I know it's a list of my work because I don't think it's useful for a reason.

✓ No, I don't have a list for my work because I don't think it's useful.

The phrase 'it's a list of my work' is unclear and 'for a reason' is unnecessary. Removing 'for a reason' and rephrasing improves clarity and pronoun use.

× When I work, I'm I'm trying to improve myself.

✓ When I work, I try to improve myself.

The original sentence uses present continuous 'I'm trying' which is acceptable but repetitive 'I'm I'm' is an error. Using simple present 'I try' fits better for habitual actions and removes repetition.

× I'm trying to to improve my job because I need some topics to do.

✓ I'm trying to improve my job because I need some tasks to do.

The word 'topics' is incorrectly used to mean 'tasks' or 'work items'. Replacing 'topics' with 'tasks' corrects the meaning and pronoun use.

× If I write some works in the job, I probably have some narrows.

✓ If I write some work tasks, I probably have some errors.

'Works' is incorrect plural form here; 'work' is uncountable or 'tasks' is better. 'Narrows' is not a correct word; likely intended 'errors' or 'narrow points'. The correction uses 'work tasks' and 'errors' for clarity.

× I don't have clue, but I think I'm at least help people to improve yourself, improve themselves, improve their jobs and don't have panic, don't have nervous.

✓ I don't have a clue, but I think it at least helps people to improve themselves, improve their jobs, and not panic or be nervous.

The original sentence misuses pronouns 'yourself' and 'themselves' inconsistently and has awkward phrasing. The correction uses 'it' as subject, consistent pronouns 'themselves', and corrects verb forms for clarity.

× I think it's a really good way to do this and do your job is the best.

✓ I think it's a really good way to do this, and doing your job well is the best.

The phrase 'do your job is the best' is awkward and lacks parallel structure. Changing to 'doing your job well is the best' corrects adjective/adverb use and improves sentence flow.

× My phone is better because every time my phone is with me and when I do lists for shopping or for job and it's more comfortable to using phone in the shop or in the office because it's more comfortable and so on.

✓ My phone is better because it is always with me, and when I make lists for shopping or work, it's more comfortable to use my phone in the shop or office because it's more convenient.

The phrase 'more comfortable to using phone' is incorrect; it should be 'more comfortable to use the phone'. Also, 'for job' should be 'for work'. The correction fixes preposition and verb form errors.

× And also you have a lot of more times to contest in a.

✓ Also, you have a lot more time to concentrate.

The phrase 'a lot of more times' is incorrect; 'a lot more time' is correct. 'Contest in a' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'concentrate'. The correction clarifies meaning and fixes quantifier use.