列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some errors and redundancy. For example, 'when I stop' should be 'when I shop', and 'planned to bird' seems incorrect. Try to use correct vocabulary and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need. Without a list, I often forget important items. Moreover, it prevents me from buying things impulsively, which saves both money and time.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words. Avoid repeating phrases like 'works like magic'. Also, try to combine sentences for better flow.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and organized. As a result, I usually complete tasks before the deadline, which creates a positive impression on my colleagues and supervisor.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'pressure or load'. Also, try to provide more specific reasons.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their freedom to buy things spontaneously. They prefer to shop without any restrictions, enjoying the flexibility to choose whatever they want at the moment.

建議: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. For example, 'This is the digital' is unclear. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect sentences. Also, avoid repeating the same idea about security.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so my list is safe and easy to access. Unlike paper lists, I don't have to worry about losing them.

× Yes, I make a list when I stop I find it extremely convenient.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop. I find it extremely convenient.

The word 'stop' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'shop' to match the question and intended meaning. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar tense error, but correcting it is necessary for clarity.

× Without the list I tend to forget things that I planned to bird.

✓ Without the list I tend to forget things that I planned to buy.

The word 'bird' is a typo or incorrect word choice; it should be 'buy' to correctly express the intended meaning of purchasing items. This is a vocabulary error, not a grammar tense issue.

× It helps me to stay focused and organized.

✓ It helps me stay focused and organized.

The verb 'help' is commonly followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Using 'to' is not incorrect but less natural in this context. Omitting 'to' makes the sentence more fluent and idiomatic.

× Moreover, I can finish my work before deadline and it helps to create a good impression on my colleagues and supervisor.

✓ Moreover, I can finish my work before the deadline and it helps create a good impression on my colleagues and supervisor.

The phrase 'before deadline' requires the definite article 'the' to specify a particular deadline. Also, 'helps to create' can be simplified to 'helps create' for naturalness.

× They might find freedom on purchasing things at the moment without any pressure or load.

✓ They might find freedom in purchasing things at the moment without any pressure or load.

The correct preposition after 'find freedom' is 'in', not 'on'. This is a common prepositional usage error.

× Everyone has their own freedom or right to choose.

✓ Everyone has their own freedom and right to choose.

Using 'or' suggests a choice between 'freedom' and 'right', but the intended meaning is that both exist. 'And' is the correct conjunction here.

× This is the digital as we carry our phone everywhere we go, so we keep it with safety as well.

✓ This is digital as we carry our phone everywhere we go, so we keep it safely as well.

'The digital' is incorrect; 'digital' is an adjective and should not have 'the' here. Also, 'with safety' should be 'safely' to correctly use the adverb form modifying 'keep'. These are article and adverb usage errors.

× Therefore, it is secure on our phone rather than on a paper.

✓ Therefore, it is secure on our phone rather than on paper.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here and does not need an article. This is an article usage error.