列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is good but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence variety. For example, instead of repeating 'it helps me', you can combine ideas and use linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save both time and money. For instance, yesterday at Vadvatini, I used a list on my phone to buy only what I needed, which prevented me from making impulsive purchases.

建議: Avoid repeating the same ideas and improve clarity. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, correct some grammar mistakes and use more precise vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively. As a result, I usually complete my tasks before the deadline. Making lists has become a very useful habit for me.

建議: Be careful with word choice and pronunciation ('lease' should be 'lists'). Also, avoid filler words like 'umm'. Try to express your opinion more politely and provide clearer reasons with linking words.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer to make spontaneous decisions based on their preferences. However, I believe that making lists is important for better organization and time management.

建議: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and be more specific about advantages of using phone for lists.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more secure and convenient than paper, which can easily get lost. Additionally, using phone apps helps me manage my time and budget more efficiently.

× Yes, I always make a list when I go for shopping.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go shopping' is correct; 'go for shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed directly by the activity in '-ing' form without 'for'. In English, we say 'go shopping', not 'go for shopping'.

× At that time I had a list on my phone and I bought the exact same thing that I needed to and I didn't take the impulsive decision.

✓ At that time I had a list on my phone and I bought exactly the things that I needed and I didn't make an impulsive decision.

The phrase 'the exact same thing that I needed to' is awkward; 'exactly the things that I needed' is clearer. Also, 'didn't take the impulsive decision' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make an impulsive decision'.

× This way I can finish my time before deadline.

✓ This way I can finish my work before the deadline.

The phrase 'finish my time' is incorrect; we finish tasks or work, not time. Also, 'before deadline' needs the definite article 'the' before 'deadline'.

× This week always works for me like a magic and I always prefer to make a list of works.

✓ This method always works for me like magic and I always prefer to make a list of tasks.

'This week always works' is incorrect; likely the speaker means 'this method'. 'Like a magic' should be 'like magic' without 'a'. 'A list of works' is incorrect; 'works' is uncountable or plural noun meaning jobs, so 'tasks' is better.

× I think some people don't like making lease because they believe it's restrictive and they might like to take impulsive decisions umm on the basis of their likes and dislikes, which is also a good thing.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it's restrictive and they might like to make impulsive decisions based on their likes and dislikes, which is also a good thing.

'Making lease' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'. 'Take impulsive decisions' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make decisions'. 'On the basis of' is better expressed as 'based on' in this context.

× I always prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on a paper because we might lost our paper if we carry it with us.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because we might lose our paper if we carry it with us.

'On a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' as a material is uncountable and does not take an article here. Also, 'might lost' is incorrect; the modal verb 'might' should be followed by the base form 'lose'.

× But we keep our phone with safety and it is very secure with us.

✓ But we keep our phone safely and it is very secure with us.

'With safety' is incorrect; the adverb 'safely' should be used to describe how we keep the phone. The rest is acceptable.