列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, writing down important items saves me time and energy by preventing unnecessary trips.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit repetitive and lacks clear linking words. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases. Also, try to use varied vocabulary to express your points.

範例: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks efficiently. As a result, I feel less stressed and can complete my work before the deadline without pressure.

建議: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Make sure to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons using linking words. Avoid confusing words and check grammar carefully.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it unnecessary or time-consuming. However, I would suggest making lists since they make tasks easier and improve the shopping experience.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific reasons using linking words. Make sure to finish your sentences and avoid abrupt endings.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because paper is easy to carry anywhere without worrying about battery life. This makes it more convenient for me when shopping or working.

× I always make a list when I saw it is flexible and convenient for me.

✓ I always make a list because I see it is flexible and convenient for me.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'saw' (past tense) when the present tense 'see' is appropriate to express a habitual action. Use present tense for general truths or habits.

× I always make lists for my work.

✓ I always make a list for my work.

The singular form 'a list' fits better here as the context implies one list per work session. Using plural 'lists' can be correct but may confuse the meaning.

× It helps to manage or organize my work in an efficient way which makes me feel less stressed and manage my work and I can finish my work before deadline easily without any pressure.

✓ It helps me manage and organize my work efficiently, which makes me feel less stressed and allows me to finish my work before the deadline easily and without any pressure.

The original sentence is run-on and lacks clarity. Breaking it into clearer parts and using proper conjunctions improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× Lists I think some people don't like making news because they think it's unnecessary or extra.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary or extra.

The sentence incorrectly places 'Lists' at the beginning and uses 'news' instead of 'lists'. Correct pronoun and noun usage is essential for clarity.

× But I if I can suggest them, I would suggest them to make a list because it makes our work much more easier and it also have to enhance the experience of shopping.

✓ But if I could suggest, I would recommend making a list because it makes our work much easier and also enhances the shopping experience.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions and incorrect verb forms. Simplifying conjunctions and correcting verb agreement improves the sentence.

× it makes our work much more easier

✓ it makes our work much easier

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective. Use either 'much easier' or 'more easy' but not both.

× it also have to enhance the experience of shopping.

✓ it also enhances the shopping experience.

The verb 'have' does not agree with singular subject 'it'. Use 'enhances' to match the singular subject and improve clarity.

× Or your phone. I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on phone because on paper we can carry it anywhere without any hassle, but on phone we have to worry about the battery life so I.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because with paper we can carry it anywhere without any hassle, but with a phone, we have to worry about battery life.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. Completing the sentence and correcting prepositions and articles improves clarity and grammatical correctness.