列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but lacks clarity and natural flow. Try to use correct tenses and avoid informal phrases like 'wanna'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I enjoy window shopping. However, sometimes I check products spontaneously to see what interests me.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain your ideas clearly. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm' and focus on giving specific reasons or examples.

範例: I sometimes make a task list before work because it reminds me of the tasks I need to complete. However, I find it time-consuming to prepare the list every day.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Make sure to directly answer the question and provide clear reasons with examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive. For example, when unexpected tasks arise, they prefer to handle them spontaneously rather than following a fixed plan.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors. Use correct verb forms and complete your sentences. Also, try to add linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer to make my list on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can check the list anytime and avoid losing it, which often happens with paper lists.

× I don't think I am an organized person so I never made a list before I shop and I also really enjoyed window shopping.

✓ I don't think I am an organized person so I have never made a list before I shop and I also really enjoy window shopping.

The sentence mixes past tense 'made' with present context 'before I shop'. Using present perfect 'have never made' is correct to express experience up to now. Also, 'enjoyed' should be present tense 'enjoy' to match the ongoing habit.

× I wanna check the product, whatever I would.

✓ I want to check the product, whatever I would like.

The phrase 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to'. The phrase 'whatever I would' is incomplete and unclear; adding 'like' clarifies the intention. Also, 'check' is correct as base verb after 'want to'.

× Well I tried to make it to the list or like a task list before I work umm at some point it remind me umm what kind of test I need to do that day.

✓ Well, I tried to make a list or like a task list before I work. At some point, it reminds me what kind of tasks I need to do that day.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'tried' with present tense 'work' and 'remind'. 'Work' should be present tense to indicate habitual action. 'Remind' should be 'reminds' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'test' should be 'tasks' to fit context.

× But actually I think it it take a lot of.

✓ But actually, I think it takes a lot of effort.

The sentence is incomplete and has repetition 'it it'. 'Take' should be 'takes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Adding 'effort' completes the thought.

× I think making at least help us organize our work sometime when we face some ad hoc tasks and we can know what kind of process and just organize.

✓ I think making at least helps us organize our work sometimes when we face some ad hoc tasks and we can know what kind of process to follow and just organize.

'Making at least' likely means 'making a list'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'to follow' clarifies meaning.

× I would prefer make my list on my phone 'cause I will carry my phone all the time so I can check the list immediately and I won't forget.

✓ I would prefer to make my list on my phone because I carry my phone all the time so I can check the list immediately and I won't forget.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in infinitive form 'to make'. 'Cause' is informal; 'because' is better. 'Will carry' is changed to 'carry' to express habitual action.

× If I wrote in on paper I will lost them, but I will never.

✓ If I write it on paper, I will lose it, but I never do.

The conditional sentence should use present tense 'write' in the if-clause for first conditional. 'Lost' should be 'lose' in future tense. 'In' is incorrect preposition; 'it' is correct object pronoun. The sentence is incomplete; 'I never do' completes the thought.