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Part 1

考官

Do you make a list when you shop?

考生

Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. It helps me to stay organised and ensures that I don't forget any important items. For example, when I shop for groceries, I am having a list save my time and prevent unnecessary purchases.

考官

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

考生

Well, practically I won't really make an actual list. Umm, I just memorized what I have to do in my head and just do it right away.

考官

Why don't some people like making lists?

考生

Some people feel stressed after they make the list because it seems that you have to do everything on the list and if they don't, it is a bit discouraging for them and I think that's the reason why people don't like making a list.

考官

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

考生

Definitely making a list on my phone because a is always at my fingertips and by making a digital checklist you can always change things easily.

評估

總分

總分: 6.0流暢度與連貫性: 6.5發音: 6.0文法: 6.0詞彙: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

分數: 75.0

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but the sentence 'I am having a list save my time and prevent unnecessary purchases' is grammatically incorrect and slightly unclear. Try to use correct verb forms and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organised and prevents me from forgetting important items. For instance, when I shop for groceries, having a list saves me time and stops me from buying things I don't need.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

分數: 65.0

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and using the correct tense consistently. Also, try to provide a bit more detail or explanation to enrich your response.

範例: I don't usually make a physical list for my work. Instead, I memorise the tasks I need to complete and try to do them straight away, which works well for me most of the time.

Why don't some people like making lists?

分數: 80.0

建議: Your answer is relevant and provides a clear reason, but it could be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to avoid repeating phrases like 'people don't like making a list' at the end.

範例: Some people feel stressed after making a list because it gives the impression that they must complete every task. Consequently, if they fail to do so, they may feel discouraged, which is why some avoid making lists altogether.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

分數: 70.0

建議: Your answer is clear but contains a small error ('a is always at my fingertips'). Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a bit more explanation.

範例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it is always at my fingertips. Moreover, using a digital checklist allows me to easily add, remove, or change items whenever necessary.

文法

Verb + -ing form

× For example, when I shop for groceries, I am having a list save my time and prevent unnecessary purchases.

For example, when I shop for groceries, I have a list to save my time and prevent unnecessary purchases.

The phrase 'I am having a list save my time' incorrectly uses the present continuous tense with 'having' and lacks the infinitive 'to' before 'save'. The correct form is 'I have a list to save my time', using the simple present tense and the infinitive to express purpose.

Past tense issue

× I just memorized what I have to do in my head and just do it right away.

I just memorise what I have to do in my head and just do it right away.

The verb 'memorized' is in the past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so the present tense 'memorise' is appropriate to match the present tense 'have' and 'do'.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Definitely making a list on my phone because a is always at my fingertips and by making a digital checklist you can always change things easily.

Definitely making a list on my phone because it is always at my fingertips and by making a digital checklist you can always change things easily.

The sentence uses 'a' without a noun following it, which is incorrect. The pronoun 'it' should be used to refer to 'my phone' instead of 'a'.

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