列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, explain why making a list helps you remember and reduces stress with clear reasons.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For instance, when I write down items, I feel less stressed and more organized. Therefore, making a list makes shopping easier and more efficient for me.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using clearer linking words. Also, avoid repetition and explain how the list helps you complete tasks effectively.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work, and it works like magic. On busy days, I prioritize tasks by importance, which helps me complete all my work efficiently and on time.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be more natural by avoiding repeated phrases and improving sentence flow. Use linking words to contrast opinions smoothly.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary or time-consuming. However, I believe lists are helpful because they prevent forgetting important things and reduce stress during shopping.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly.

範例: I usually prefer to make a list on paper because I can carry it anywhere without worrying about battery life. This helps me shop stress-free and enjoy the experience more.

× Yes, I always my colleagues when I saw.

✓ Yes, I always see my colleagues when I shop.

The original sentence is missing a verb after 'always' and uses 'saw' incorrectly. The correct verb is 'see' in present tense to match 'always'. The sentence structure needs a verb to be complete.

× I personally believe making lists when going to shopping makes it more flexible and it is convenient for me.

✓ I personally believe making lists when going shopping makes it more flexible and convenient for me.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping'. Also, 'it is convenient for me' can be simplified to 'convenient for me' for better flow.

× I tend to forget things if I write those on paper.

✓ I tend to forget things if I don't write them on paper.

The original sentence contradicts the intended meaning. To express that writing things helps remember, the sentence should say 'if I don't write them'.

× It makes me easier to remember and it is less stressful.

✓ It makes it easier for me to remember and it is less stressful.

The phrase 'makes me easier' is incorrect; the correct form is 'makes it easier for me' to indicate the subject and object properly.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work and it works like a magic.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and it works like magic.

The phrase 'like a magic' is incorrect; 'magic' is an uncountable noun here and does not need an article.

× On my busy days I prefer to write my work on a hierarchy and I I perform the work on the basis of its importance.

✓ On my busy days, I prefer to write my work in a hierarchy and perform the tasks based on their importance.

The phrase 'write my work on a hierarchy' is incorrect; 'in a hierarchy' is correct. Also, 'I I perform' is a repetition error. 'On the basis of its importance' is better expressed as 'based on their importance'.

× This way it helps to get my all work done.

✓ This way, it helps me get all my work done.

The phrase 'get my all work done' is incorrect; the correct order is 'all my work'. Also, 'helps to get' should be 'helps me get'.

× I think some people don't like making lists because they may think it's unnecessary and extra.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they may think it's unnecessary and excessive.

The word 'extra' is informal and vague here; 'excessive' is a better adjective to describe something unnecessary or too much.

× However, I personally believe it is not being extra.

✓ However, I personally believe it is not excessive.

Again, 'being extra' is informal and unclear; 'excessive' is more appropriate in this context.

× It is about making sure that we don't forget the things that we have to buy and it is less stressful as well.

✓ It is about making sure that we don't forget the things we have to buy, and it is less stressful as well.

The phrase 'the things that we have to buy' is correct but can be simplified by removing 'that'. Also, a comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my paper because wherever I go I can carry a small piece of paper and I don't have to worry about my battery life as well.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on paper because wherever I go, I can carry a small piece of paper and I don't have to worry about my battery life as well.

The phrase 'make a list on my paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct expression. Also, a comma after 'wherever I go' improves readability.

× This way I can buy stress free and it helps to make me enjoy the shopping.

✓ This way, I can shop stress-free, and it helps me enjoy shopping.

The phrase 'buy stress free' is incorrect; 'shop stress-free' is the correct expression. Also, 'helps to make me enjoy' should be 'helps me enjoy'. Commas improve sentence flow.