列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and structured with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. For example, say 'I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time.'

範例: I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time. For instance, last week I bought everything I needed without forgetting anything, which made shopping efficient and stress-free.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Focus on directly answering the question with relevant details. Avoid unrelated ideas like 'romanticizing life' unless you explain clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks, and it works well. It helps me remember important duties and manage my time efficiently, so I can complete everything on schedule.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use proper sentence structures. Also, provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and unnecessary. However, I believe lists make tasks easier by organizing priorities and reducing stress.

建議: Your answer has unclear phrases like 'sets my pepper and pen' and is incomplete. Use clear and correct expressions. Also, organize your answer with a topic sentence and supporting reasons using linking words.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me. This way, I don't have to worry about losing the list, unlike paper lists which can be easily misplaced.

× I actually make the list when I go to shop because it makes it easier to remember what I am going to shop and it also save my time.

✓ I actually make the list when I go shopping because it makes it easier to remember what I am going to buy and it also saves my time.

The verb 'shop' should be in the '-ing' form 'shopping' after 'go' to indicate the activity. Also, 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Additionally, 'what I am going to shop' is incorrect; it should be 'what I am going to buy' because 'shop' is an activity, not an object.

× So I like going to shopping with the list and you know that makes my life easier and help remaining.

✓ So I like going shopping with the list and you know that makes my life easier and helps me stay organized.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'going shopping'. Also, 'help remaining' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'helps me stay organized' or a similar phrase. 'Helps' must agree with singular subject 'that'.

× Does it work? Yes. I like to make a list for my work and it works every time like magic because you know, when I make a list it makes easier to remember what I have to buy and it also saves my time.

✓ Does it work? Yes. I like to make a list for my work and it works every time like magic because, you know, when I make a list it makes it easier to remember what I have to buy and it also saves my time.

The phrase 'it makes easier' is missing the object 'it'. The correct form is 'it makes it easier'. This is not a modal verb issue but a sentence structure issue; however, since modal verb usage is the closest category, it is addressed here.

× I think some people don't like making this because they feel lazy to make a list and they think it's unnecessary and it's extra.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they feel lazy to make a list and they think it's unnecessary and extra.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used to refer to 'making lists'. It should be 'making lists' or 'making them'. Also, 'extra' is better without 'it's' in this context.

× Oh, I prefer to make a list on my phone because whenever I make a list on my phone, I don't have to worry about losing it and it also sets my pepper and pen and it is more flexible and convenient because wherever I go, I carry my phone with me rather than a piece of paper it's.

✓ Oh, I prefer to make a list on my phone because whenever I make a list on my phone, I don't have to worry about losing it and it also saves my paper and pen and it is more flexible and convenient because wherever I go, I carry my phone with me rather than a piece of paper.

The phrase 'sets my pepper and pen' is incorrect; it should be 'saves my paper and pen'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'it's' which is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.