列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answerが少し冗長で、文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、直接的なトピック文を使い、具体的な理由や例を付け加えましょう。例えば、「I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, sometimes I forget items, but it's not a big problem.」のように簡潔にまとめると良いです。

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, sometimes I forget items, but it's not a big problem.

建議: 答えは直接的ですが、文法の誤り（"to not missing"）があります。より自然にするために、正しい文法を使い、理由をもう少し具体的に説明しましょう。例えば、「Yes, I always make a schedule for my work, and it helps me avoid missing any tasks because I can organize my time better.」のようにすると良いです。

範例: Yes, I always make a schedule for my work, and it helps me avoid missing any tasks because I can organize my time better.

建議: 答えが質問に対して明確でなく、内容も曖昧です。質問に直接答え、理由や意見を具体的に述べることが必要です。例えば、「Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to work more flexibly.」のように簡潔に答えましょう。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to work more flexibly.

建議: 答えはほぼ明確ですが、文法的な誤り（"prefer make"）と繰り返しがあります。より自然にするために、正しい文法を使い、理由を加えると良いです。例えば、「I prefer to make lists on paper when working because it helps me focus, but for shopping or other things, I use my phone for convenience.」のように答えましょう。

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper when working because it helps me focus, but for shopping or other things, I use my phone for convenience.

× I might make a little when I shop, I'm not like that kind of shopping person.

✓ I might make a list when I shop, I'm not like that kind of shopping person.

The original sentence is missing the noun 'list' after 'make a'. The phrase 'make a little' is incorrect because 'little' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify. The correct phrase is 'make a list'.

× But yeah, sometimes I missed, but it's OK, you know, I can buy.

✓ But yeah, sometimes I miss, but it's OK, you know, I can buy.

The verb 'missed' is in the past tense, but the context refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'miss' is appropriate here.

× Yes, I always schedule in my work so it's really helped me to not missing any task.

✓ Yes, I always schedule my work so it really helps me not to miss any task.

The phrase 'schedule in my work' is incorrect; 'schedule my work' is correct. Also, 'helped me to not missing' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me not to miss' to maintain correct verb forms and tense.

× So yeah, it's not really matter. You need to making a list for everybody.

✓ So yeah, it doesn't really matter. You don't need to make a list for everybody.

'It's not really matter' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'it doesn't really matter'. Also, 'You need to making' is incorrect; it should be 'You don't need to make' to express the intended meaning properly.

× When I'm working I prefer make a list on paper, but just like for shopping or for other other thing I always make a list on my phone.

✓ When I'm working I prefer to make a list on paper, but for shopping or other things I always make a list on my phone.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb, so 'prefer to make' is correct. Also, 'other other thing' is redundant; it should be 'other things'.