列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to be more concise and use correct verb forms. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. For example, say "I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay within my budget and find discounts."

範例: I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay within my budget and find discounts.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat unclear. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid repeating the same idea. For example, say "No, I don't make lists for my work because I rely on my memory and am punctual in completing tasks."

範例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I rely on my memory and am punctual in completing tasks.

建議: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example, say "In my opinion, it depends on personal preference. Some people make lists to stay organized, while others rely on their strong memory and prefer not to make lists."

範例: In my opinion, it depends on personal preference. Some people make lists to stay organized, while others rely on their strong memory and prefer not to make lists.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to be more concise and use correct sentence structures. For example, say "I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it allows me to write unlimited notes and is very convenient."

範例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it allows me to write unlimited notes and is very convenient.

× whenever I go for shopping I usually often make list

✓ whenever I go shopping I usually make a list

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list' because 'list' is a countable noun and requires an article here. The adverbs 'usually' and 'often' are redundant together; using one is sufficient.

× I usually often make list

✓ I usually make a list

Using both 'usually' and 'often' together is redundant. Choose one adverb to express frequency clearly.

× make list

✓ make a list

'List' is a countable noun and requires the indefinite article 'a' when singular.

× I usually see for discounts

✓ I usually look for discounts

'See for' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'look for' when searching or seeking something.

× I prefer to make list whenever I go for shopping

✓ I prefer to make a list whenever I go shopping

'Make list' should be 'make a list' and 'go for shopping' should be 'go shopping' as per standard English usage.

× No, I doesn't make a list for my work

✓ No, I don't make a list for my work

'I' requires the auxiliary verb 'do' in negative sentences, so 'doesn't' is incorrect; it should be 'don't'.

× my work is like depend on me

✓ my work depends on me

'Is like depend on me' is incorrect. The correct form is 'depends on me' where 'depends' is the verb and 'on' is the correct preposition.

× I was very punctual to do my work on time

✓ I am very punctual in doing my work on time

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'am' is appropriate. Also, 'punctual to do' should be 'punctual in doing'.

× Some people like to make lists because to keep things remain

✓ Some people like to make lists to keep things in order

'Because to keep things remain' is incorrect. The phrase should be 'to keep things in order' or 'to keep things organized'.

× some people like to like, don't like to make a list because of their sharp memory

✓ some people don't like to make a list because of their sharp memory

The phrase 'like to like, don't like to make a list' is confusing and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'don't like to make a list'.

× they are very strong to remain things

✓ they have a strong memory to remember things

'Strong to remain things' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'have a strong memory to remember things'.

× I genuinely make to list on my mobile phone

✓ I genuinely make lists on my mobile phone

'Make to list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make lists'.

× I can list a lot of notes and a lot of list in my mobile

✓ I can list a lot of notes and many lists on my mobile

'A lot of list' is incorrect because 'list' is countable and plural form 'lists' is needed with 'many'.

× there is an no limit and pages are unlimited

✓ there is no limit and pages are unlimited

'An no limit' is incorrect; the article 'an' should be omitted before 'no limit'.

× I can write a lot of a number of things in my mobile

✓ I can write a large number of things on my mobile

'A lot of a number of things' is redundant and incorrect. Use either 'a lot of things' or 'a large number of things'. Also, 'in my mobile' should be 'on my mobile'.

× I prefer to do make

✓ I prefer to make

'Do make' is incorrect; the correct phrase is simply 'make'.