列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me keep track of what I need and avoid buying unnecessary items. This way, I can also stick to my budget more easily.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some hesitation and repetition. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid filler words. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: It depends on the type of work, but as a doctor, I always use a to-do list. This helps me manage my tasks efficiently, which improves patient care and ensures I complete all necessary duties.

建議: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because of their personality; they prefer to complete tasks spontaneously throughout the day, doing what suits them best.

建議: Your answer is understandable but includes hesitation and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas more fluently and use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I have access to it all day, and it helps reduce paper waste.

× making a list is important to keep track all of the things that I need to buy for the house or personal stuff

✓ making a list is important to keep track of all the things that I need to buy for the house or personal stuff

The phrase 'keep track' requires the preposition 'of' to indicate what is being tracked. Omitting 'of' is a common prepositional error. The correct phrase is 'keep track of'. This clarifies the relationship between 'keep track' and 'all the things'. Use 'keep track of' to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× and also it we can avoid buying extra or unnecessary stuff and we can keep on a budget

✓ and also we can avoid buying extra or unnecessary stuff and we can keep on a budget

The phrase 'it we can' is incorrect because 'it' is an unnecessary pronoun here and causes confusion. The sentence should directly connect the clauses without 'it'. Removing 'it' corrects the pronoun misuse and improves sentence flow.

× so we always have A to do list to do

✓ so we always have a to-do list to do

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is in the middle of a sentence. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun. Correct article usage and hyphenation improve grammatical accuracy and readability.

× we always have A to do list to finish and to accomplish

✓ we always have a to-do list to finish and to accomplish

Same as above, 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Proper article usage and compound noun formation are necessary for grammatical correctness.

× finish all the stuff that needed to be done

✓ finish all the stuff that needs to be done

The phrase 'needed to be done' is past tense, but the context implies present necessity. Using 'needs to be done' (present tense) matches the ongoing nature of the tasks. Also, 'stuff' is informal but acceptable here. Correct tense and preposition usage improve clarity.

× They don't like to be helped by A to do list

✓ They don't like to be helped by a to-do list

Again, 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Correct article usage and compound noun formation are necessary for grammatical correctness.

× I do prefer making a list on my phone as it's now easier

✓ I do prefer making a list on my phone as it's easier now

The phrase 'it's now easier' is awkward; placing 'now' at the end ('easier now') is more natural in English. This is an adverb placement issue improving sentence flow and clarity.

× Umm and. And because we can limit our use on the paper

✓ Umm, and because we can limit our use of paper

The sentence has an unnecessary period after 'and' and uses 'on the paper' incorrectly. The phrase should be 'use of paper' without 'the' because 'paper' here is uncountable and general. Also, removing the period and combining the sentence improves coherence.