列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use the present tense consistently and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, make your sentences more concise and directly answer the question with clear supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me organize my thoughts and remember everything I need. For example, writing the list on paper ensures I don't forget important items.

建議: Your response has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat repetitive. Focus on using complete sentences with correct grammar and avoid filler words. Provide clear reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I make a list of my tasks because it helps me organize my work efficiently. As a result, I can complete my duties on time and be more productive at my job.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly explain the reasons why some people dislike making lists, and contrast that with why others prefer it. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel too busy and think it takes extra time. However, others prefer lists because writing things down helps them stay organized and remember important tasks.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains filler words and some grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently without hesitation and use correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: To be honest, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier to access them anytime. In contrast, paper lists can be lost or misplaced, which is inconvenient.

× Yes, I make a list before I go shopping because it helped me to organize my mind and arranging my, uh, attention and writing down on a paper uh, As a result, I really don't forgot what I.

✓ Yes, I make a list before I go shopping because it helps me to organize my mind, arrange my attention, and write it down on paper. As a result, I really don't forget what I need.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'helped' with present tense context. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to match the habitual action. Also, 'arranging' should be 'arrange' to maintain parallel verb forms. 'Don't forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'don't forget' because 'don't' requires the base form of the verb.

× Yes, I make a list for my task and because help me to organise my mind and arrangement and umm, as a result I will be an efficient person in my workplace and it it is for me too.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my tasks because it helps me to organize my mind and arrangements. As a result, I can be an efficient person in my workplace, and it is useful for me too.

The sentence lacks the modal verb or auxiliary 'helps' after 'because' to indicate present habitual action. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. 'Will be' is acceptable but 'can be' better expresses ability or potential. 'It it is' is a repetition and should be corrected.

× Because they're busy time, they have busy time and it's more likely to forgot an important thing. So that some of them really like to make a list and writing them on a paper to organize their mind and their arrangements.

✓ Because they are busy, they are more likely to forget important things. So some of them really like to make a list and write it on paper to organize their minds and arrangements.

'Busy time' is incorrect; 'busy' is an adjective and does not need 'time' here. 'More likely to forgot' should be 'more likely to forget' because 'to' is followed by the base verb. 'Writing them on a paper' should be 'write it on paper' for correct verb form and article usage. 'Their mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with plural subject 'some of them'.

× Uh, to be honest with you, and nowadays I prefer to make a list in my application on my phone because I, uh, easier to access them and uh, if I writing them on a paper, it's likely to lose them.

✓ Uh, to be honest with you, nowadays I prefer to make a list in my app on my phone because it is easier to access them, and if I write them on paper, it's likely that I will lose them.

'In my application' is better as 'in my app' for natural usage. 'I, uh, easier to access them' is missing a verb; it should be 'it is easier to access them'. 'If I writing' is incorrect; it should be 'if I write' to use the correct verb form after 'if'. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here. 'It's likely to lose them' should be 'it's likely that I will lose them' for clarity and correct tense.