列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e onek bar 'because' use korchen, ja redundant mone hoy. Apnar uttor ke aro natural korte, ekbar 'because' use kore, tarpor supporting details dite paren. Sentence structure aro shoja rakhun ebong proyojon chara repetition avoid korun.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I bought all the ingredients for a recipe without forgetting anything, which made cooking easier.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu repetition ache ebong kichu sentence structure vul ache. Apni linking words use kore uttor ke aro logical korte paren. E chara, vocabulary aro boro korte paren ebong sentence gulo ke shoja rakhun.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and not forget important tasks. Moreover, having a list makes my work process more efficient and less stressful.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache ebong sentence gulo clear na. Apni proshner uttor direct dite paren, tarpor supporting details dite linking words diye. Vocabulary aro boro korte hobe ebong sentence gulo ke shoja rakhun.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. However, it depends on personal preference; some find lists helpful while others do not.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu confusing phrase ache, ja conversation ke natural na kore. Apni clear ebong shoja bhabe apnar preference bolun, tarpor karon bolte linking words use korun. Vocabulary aro relevant rakhun.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and time-efficient. For instance, I can easily add or remove items anytime without carrying paper around.

× Honestly speaking, I always ensure to make a list or inventory list because you know, because I think when we have a list to do something or to what to purchase, it will be so easy for us.

✓ Honestly speaking, I always ensure making a list or inventory list because, you know, I think when we have a list to do something or to know what to purchase, it will be so easy for us.

The phrase 'ensure to make' is incorrect; 'ensure' should be followed by a gerund ('making') rather than an infinitive ('to make'). Also, 'to what to purchase' is incorrect; it should be 'to know what to purchase' to clarify the meaning.

× Honestly speaking, I always try to ma make a list for my work purpose because it you know, it helps me to stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important of my homework.

✓ Honestly speaking, I always try to make a list for my work purpose because, you know, it helps me to stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important for my homework.

The phrase 'try to ma make' contains a typo and should be 'try to make'. Also, 'important of my homework' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'important for my homework'.

× And having a list also makes the whole process so easier for me and efficient and also efficient.

✓ And having a list also makes the whole process much easier and more efficient for me.

The phrase 'so easier' is incorrect; 'easier' is a comparative adjective and should be preceded by 'much' or 'a lot'. Also, 'and efficient and also efficient' is repetitive and should be corrected to 'and more efficient'.

× I think most of the people like to make a list like me because it helps them or everyone in various ways.

✓ I think most people like to make lists like me because it helps them in various ways.

'Most of the people' is better as 'most people'. Also, 'make a list' should be pluralized to 'make lists' to match the plural subject. The phrase 'helps them or everyone' is awkward and simplified to 'helps them'.

× I prefer both having a list. Also don't have a list. It's actually varies person to person and some people makes list and some people don't.

✓ I prefer both having a list and not having a list. It actually varies from person to person, and some people make lists while others don't.

'It's actually varies' is incorrect; it should be 'It actually varies'. 'Some people makes list' is incorrect; 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'people'. Also, 'some people don't' is clarified to 'others don't' for better flow.

× Honestly speaking for me I prefer both the list on my phone and also paper.

✓ Honestly speaking, I prefer both lists on my phone and on paper.

The phrase 'both the list on my phone and also paper' is awkward. It should be 'both lists on my phone and on paper' to correctly express preference for two options.

× But now in however you know that everything is getting so easy so we don't need have to do something like time transient.

✓ But now, however, you know that everything is getting so easy, so we don't need to do things like time-consuming tasks.

The phrase 'But now in however' is incorrect; 'however' alone suffices. 'We don't need have to do' is incorrect; it should be 'we don't need to do'. 'Time transient' is incorrect and unclear; 'time-consuming tasks' is a better expression.

× So that's why I always try to do my list on my phone because it's so time efficient.

✓ So that's why I always try to make my list on my phone because it's very time-efficient.

'Try to do my list' is awkward; 'try to make my list' is better. 'So time efficient' should be 'very time-efficient' to correctly modify the adjective.