列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了做购物清单的习惯，但语法错误较多，且表达不够简洁自然。建议注意动词时态和搭配，避免重复表达。可以用更简洁的句子表达原因。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I buy everything I need and avoid making extra trips to the store.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少连贯的支持细节。建议完整回答问题，使用连词连接句子，并具体说明清单如何帮助工作。

範例: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and manage my tasks efficiently, especially when I am busy.

建議: 回答表达了原因，但语法和句式不够准确自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，注意主谓一致和动词形式。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time and they prefer not to spend extra effort planning their tasks.

建議: 回答未完成且表达不清晰，缺少具体细节。建议完整表达观点，说明用手机做清单的具体优点，并使用连词使句子连贯。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it allows me to easily review and edit them, ensuring that my list is complete and up to date.

× I always make a list when I'm going to shop because I want to make sure that I have buy a lot of things that can support my life recently and I want to make sure that I don't need to go there these days.

✓ I always make a list when I'm going shopping because I want to make sure that I have bought a lot of things that can support my life recently and I want to make sure that I don't need to go there these days.

这里“going to shop”应改为“going shopping”，因为动词后接动名词形式表示正在进行的动作；“have buy”应改为“have bought”，因为现在完成时需要用过去分词形式。

× I always make a list when I'm going to shop because I want to make sure that I have buy a lot of things that can support my life recently and I want to make sure that I don't need to go there these days.

✓ I always make a list when I'm going shopping because I want to make sure that I have bought a lot of things that can support my life recently and I want to make sure that I don't need to go there these days.

现在完成时态需要用动词的过去分词形式，‘buy’应改为‘bought’。

× I want to make sure that I don't need to go there these days.

✓ I want to make sure that I don't have to go there these days.

‘don't need to’用法不当，表达义务或必要时应使用‘don't have to’。

× Does it work? Yes. I always make lists in my work and it has a certain importance for me because. When I'm busy, I always feel in a hurry. I will figure out some.

✓ Does it work? Yes. I always make lists at work and they are quite important to me because when I'm busy, I always feel hurried. I will figure out some tasks.

句子结构不完整，‘because.’后面不应断句；‘in my work’应为‘at work’；‘feel in a hurry’应为‘feel hurried’；‘I will figure out some’不完整，应补充宾语。

× I always make lists in my work and it has a certain importance for me because.

✓ I always make lists at work and they are quite important to me because.

‘in my work’应改为‘at work’，表示在工作场所或工作期间。

× I always make lists in my work and it has a certain importance for me because.

✓ I always make lists at work and they are quite important to me because.

‘lists’为复数，代词应使用‘they’而非‘it’。

× For some people don't like make lists, I think maybe because they think that would take a lot of time to do that and they don't like to make extra thinking about their tasks.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists; I think maybe because they think it would take a lot of time to do that and they don't like to think extra about their tasks.

‘For some people don't like make lists’结构错误，应改为‘Some people don't like to make lists’；‘make extra thinking’表达不自然，应改为‘think extra’。

× For some people don't like make lists, I think maybe because they think that would take a lot of time to do that and they don't like to make extra thinking about their tasks.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists; I think maybe because they think it would take a lot of time to do that and they don't like to think extra about their tasks.

‘think about their tasks’中‘about’使用正确，但‘make extra thinking’不正确，应改为‘think extra’。

× I prefer making a list on my phone because when I make a list, I can review it tightly and revise it to make sure that this list is completely and.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because when I make a list, I can review it carefully and revise it to make sure that this list is complete.

‘review it tightly’表达不正确，应改为‘review it carefully’；‘this list is completely and’不完整，应改为‘this list is complete’。