列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas and using linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items I need, so having a list helps me remember everything efficiently.

建議: Your answer is understandable but lacks directness and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question first, then provide additional information. Avoid unnecessary hesitation and improve sentence flow with linking words.

範例: I don't currently make lists for work because I am a student at Multanimal Modi College Patiala and not employed yet.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Use clearer linking words and correct verb forms to make your answer more natural and coherent.

範例: I think some people don't like making paper lists because technology allows them to use their phone's notes app, which is more convenient for remembering things.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid awkward phrasing and explain your reasons with better sentence structure and linking words.

範例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it's convenient; I can check it anytime and it's less likely to be lost or accidentally deleted.

× sometimes I forget the things that I want to purchase

✓ sometimes I forget the things that I want to purchase

No correction needed here as 'things' is correctly used in plural form.

× nowadays people not makes lists

✓ nowadays people do not make lists

The verb 'makes' is incorrect with the plural subject 'people'. The correct form is 'make'. Also, 'do not' is needed for negation in present simple tense.

× the lists are more convenient to the people

✓ the lists are more convenient for the people

'Convenient' is usually followed by 'for' when indicating who benefits from something, not 'to'.

× I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone

No correction needed here as 'on my mobile phone' is correct prepositional usage.

× they can use their mobile phone to memorize them

✓ they can use their mobile phones to memorize them

'People' is plural, so the possessive pronoun should be 'their' and the noun 'mobile phone' should be pluralized to 'mobile phones' to agree in number.

× it cannot be deleted

✓ it cannot be deleted

No correction needed here as 'it' correctly refers to 'list'.