列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "more impulse buyer" and "I usually should categorize." Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to avoid forgetting important items. It also helps me stick to my budget and avoid impulse buying. Moreover, I categorize items by store sections to shop more efficiently. I usually use a shopping app to keep track of my list, which makes the process easier.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but contains several grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like "additional app to keep track" and "my productivity in places." Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. I use an app that sends me reminders to complete tasks on time. As a result, my productivity improves, and I feel satisfied when I finish all my tasks.

建議: Your answer is quite unclear and contains confusing phrases like "experience with placemaking" and "lists of having discovered." Try to express your ideas more simply and clearly. Explain reasons why some people avoid making lists, using specific examples or opinions. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they are not used to it or don't know how to use them effectively. Also, they might prefer other ways to organize their tasks that suit their personal style better.

建議: Your answer has several mistakes and unclear words like "make ice" and "I can easily eat it." Please check your pronunciation and word choice. Also, try to organize your answer logically with linking words and avoid redundancy. Keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. It is more convenient since I can easily add, remove, or rearrange items. There are also apps that help me organize my lists better, and I can share them with others quickly.

× It helps me stay within my budget and more impulse buyer.

✓ It helps me stay within my budget and avoid being an impulse buyer.

The phrase 'more impulse buyer' is incorrect because 'impulse buyer' is a noun phrase and cannot be used directly after 'and' without a verb. The correct form is to use a verb phrase like 'avoid being an impulse buyer' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I usually should categorize items by section of the store for efficiency and I use a shopping app to keep track of my list.

✓ I usually categorize items by section of the store for efficiency and I use a shopping app to keep track of my list.

The use of 'should' with 'usually' is incorrect here because 'should' implies advice or obligation, while 'usually' indicates a habitual action. The correct form is to use the simple present tense 'categorize' to express a regular habit.

× I use additional app to keep track of my work list with sends me a reminder.

✓ I use an additional app to keep track of my work list which sends me a reminder.

The noun 'app' is countable and singular, so it requires the article 'an' before it. Also, 'with sends me a reminder' is incorrect; it should be 'which sends me a reminder' to correctly connect the clause.

× I find that my productivity in places when I follow a list and I feel a sense of accomplishment when I shake off complete task.

✓ I find that my productivity increases when I follow a list, and I feel a sense of accomplishment when I complete tasks.

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect phrases like 'productivity in places' and 'shake off complete task.' The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning by using 'increases' for productivity and 'complete tasks' for the accomplishment.

× A lack of habit or experience with placemaking can deter some people that might not have been taught how to effectively utilize lists of having discovered a method that suits their style.

✓ A lack of habit or experience with placemaking can deter some people who might not have been taught how to effectively utilize lists or have discovered a method that suits their style.

The relative pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used for people; 'who' is the correct pronoun. Also, the phrase 'of having discovered' is incorrect; it should be 'or have discovered' to connect the ideas properly.

× I prefer to make ice on my phone because it's not always with me.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's always with me.

The word 'ice' is a typo and should be 'lists.' Also, the phrase 'because it's not always with me' contradicts the intended meaning; it should be 'because it's always with me' to explain the convenience of using the phone.

× I make it more convenient, I can easily eat it and rearrange items on a digital list, and there are apps that help me organize my list better.

✓ It makes it more convenient; I can easily edit it and rearrange items on a digital list, and there are apps that help me organize my list better.

The phrase 'I make it more convenient' is incorrect; the subject should be 'It' referring to making lists on the phone. Also, 'eat it' is a typo and should be 'edit it' to convey the correct action.