Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Do you make a list when you shop?
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I will make a list when I shop.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Because they think if they make a list it will more complicate, so they think they will shop more casual because they want to enjoy their time.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I usually make a list on paper because it will more easy to check and directly to buy what I want.
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 40.0建議: 回答没有直接回应问题,重复了考官的问题,缺乏内容和结构。建议直接回答问题,并补充简短理由。
範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 30.0建議: 回答内容与问题不符,未回答是否为工作制作清单及其效果。建议直接回答问题并提供具体细节。
範例: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks every day, and it helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答表达不够流畅,语法和用词有误,且缺少连接词。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词,使回答更自然连贯。
範例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it complicates things. Moreover, they prefer to shop casually to enjoy their time more.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答基本表达了观点,但语法和用词不够准确,缺少连接词。建议改进语法,使用连接词使表达更自然。
範例: I usually make a list on paper because it is easier to check, and I can quickly buy what I need without switching screens.
× Because they think if they make a list it will more complicate, so they think they will shop more casual because they want to enjoy their time.
✓ Because they think if they make a list it will be more complicated, so they think they will shop more casually because they want to enjoy their time.
这里“complicate”应使用形容词“complicated”,表示“复杂的”;“more casual”应使用副词“more casually”修饰动词“shop”,表示“更随意地购物”。动词后修饰动作的词应为副词。
× Because they think if they make a list it will more complicate, so they think they will shop more casual because they want to enjoy their time.
✓ Because they think if they make a list it will be more complicated, so they think they will shop more casually because they want to enjoy their time.
“more complicate”中“complicate”是动词,应改为形容词“complicated”;“more casual”应为副词“more casually”,因为修饰动词“shop”。
× I usually make a list on paper because it will more easy to check and directly to buy what I want.
✓ I usually make a list on paper because it will be easier to check and directly buy what I want.
“more easy”应改为比较级“easier”;“directly to buy”中“to”多余,应去掉,直接用动词原形“buy”。
× I usually make a list on paper because it will more easy to check and directly to buy what I want.
✓ I usually make a list on paper because it will be easier to check and directly buy what I want.
“to buy”前的“to”不应出现,动词不定式在此处不合适,应直接用动词原形“buy”。