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Part 1

考官

Do you make a list when you shop?

考生

Do you make a list when you shop?

考官

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

考生

Yes, I will make a list when I shop.

考官

Why don't some people like making lists?

考生

Because they think if they make a list it will more complicate, so they think they will shop more casual because they want to enjoy their time.

考官

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

考生

I usually make a list on paper because it will more easy to check and directly to buy what I want.

評估

總分

總分: 5.5流暢度與連貫性: 5.5發音: 5.5文法: 5.5詞彙: 5.5

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

分數: 40.0

建議: 回答没有直接回应问题,重复了考官的问题,缺乏内容和结构。建议直接回答问题,并补充简短理由。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

分數: 30.0

建議: 回答内容与问题不符,未回答是否为工作制作清单及其效果。建议直接回答问题并提供具体细节。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks every day, and it helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

Why don't some people like making lists?

分數: 60.0

建議: 回答表达不够流畅,语法和用词有误,且缺少连接词。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词,使回答更自然连贯。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it complicates things. Moreover, they prefer to shop casually to enjoy their time more.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

分數: 65.0

建議: 回答基本表达了观点,但语法和用词不够准确,缺少连接词。建议改进语法,使用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: I usually make a list on paper because it is easier to check, and I can quickly buy what I need without switching screens.

文法

Verb + -ing form

× Because they think if they make a list it will more complicate, so they think they will shop more casual because they want to enjoy their time.

Because they think if they make a list it will be more complicated, so they think they will shop more casually because they want to enjoy their time.

这里“complicate”应使用形容词“complicated”,表示“复杂的”;“more casual”应使用副词“more casually”修饰动词“shop”,表示“更随意地购物”。动词后修饰动作的词应为副词。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Because they think if they make a list it will more complicate, so they think they will shop more casual because they want to enjoy their time.

Because they think if they make a list it will be more complicated, so they think they will shop more casually because they want to enjoy their time.

“more complicate”中“complicate”是动词,应改为形容词“complicated”;“more casual”应为副词“more casually”,因为修饰动词“shop”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I usually make a list on paper because it will more easy to check and directly to buy what I want.

I usually make a list on paper because it will be easier to check and directly buy what I want.

“more easy”应改为比较级“easier”;“directly to buy”中“to”多余,应去掉,直接用动词原形“buy”。

Verb + -ing form

× I usually make a list on paper because it will more easy to check and directly to buy what I want.

I usually make a list on paper because it will be easier to check and directly buy what I want.

“to buy”前的“to”不应出现,动词不定式在此处不合适,应直接用动词原形“buy”。

重點詞彙

EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
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