列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say 'when I go shopping' instead of 'when I go to shopping', and avoid repeating 'helps me' twice. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the items I usually buy and saves me time.

建議: Your answer is unclear due to the phrase 'stay with the spleen'. Use clear and relevant vocabulary to express your idea. Also, provide more details and use linking words to explain how the list helps you at work.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused, ensuring I complete all my tasks efficiently.

建議: Avoid incomplete sentences and improve coherence by finishing your thoughts. Use linking words properly and provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it annoying and time-consuming. Moreover, they may have a strong memory and prefer to remember things without writing them down.

建議: Complete your sentences fully and avoid missing words. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy and convenient. Additionally, I can access the list quickly since my mobile is always with me.

× Yes, of course I make a list when I go to shopping.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the verb in its base form with '-ing' without 'to'. The correct form is 'go shopping'.

× It helps me to remember the things what I used to buy and it helps me in time savings.

✓ It helps me to remember the things that I usually buy and it helps me save time.

The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrectly used; 'that' should be used to refer to 'things'. Also, 'used to buy' implies past habit, but the context suggests a current habit, so 'usually buy' is better. 'Helps me in time savings' is awkward; 'helps me save time' is the correct expression.

× Yes, of course I make a list for my work because it helps me to stay with the spleen in my work.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list for my work because it helps me to stay focused in my work.

The phrase 'stay with the spleen' is incorrect and likely a misuse or mistranslation. The intended meaning is probably 'stay focused'. Also, 'in my work' is acceptable here.

× I think some people do not like making lists because they find it annoying and time wasting. Moreover, I think they have strong memory power to remember the things but.

✓ I think some people do not like making lists because they find it annoying and time-wasting. Moreover, I think they have a strong memory to remember things.

The phrase 'time wasting' should be hyphenated as 'time-wasting' when used as an adjective. The sentence ends with 'but' which is incorrect; it should be removed or completed. 'Strong memory power' is awkward; 'strong memory' is better. 'Remember the things' should be 'remember things' for natural expression.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I find it easy and convenient. Moreover, it helps me to see the list quickly and my mobile is always with.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I find it easy and convenient. Moreover, it helps me to see the list quickly and my mobile is always with me.

The phrase 'my mobile is always with' is incomplete; it requires the pronoun 'me' to complete the expression 'with me' indicating possession or accompaniment.