列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating words and phrases, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items, saving both time and money. Therefore, I believe making a shopping list is a useful habit for everyone.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to make your points clearer and avoid repeating similar ideas.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before starting work because it helps me organize my tasks efficiently. This way, I can manage my time better and complete jobs faster. Therefore, making lists really works well for me.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your ideas with linking words.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and unnecessary. For example, I used to think that writing tasks down was a waste of time and preferred to start working immediately. However, I now realise that laziness often prevents people from making lists, even though it is a helpful habit.

建議: Your answer is relevant but slightly repetitive and ends abruptly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and conclude your answer clearly within the sentence limit.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because everything is digital nowadays. For instance, my assignments and college work are stored on my phone or laptop. This makes it easy to access and transfer my lists anytime, which is very convenient.

× I do believe, however, I believe that it is a everybody should have.

✓ I do believe, however, that it is something everybody should have.

The pronoun 'a everybody' is incorrect. 'Everybody' is an indefinite pronoun and does not require an article 'a' before it. The correct phrase is 'something everybody should have.' This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So it is a good practice to organize your task before you start it.

✓ So it is a good practice to organize your tasks before you start them.

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple tasks. Also, the pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun. This corrects singular/plural agreement and pronoun reference.

× And also for a also for an efficient time management you should have a habit of managing your task really well.

✓ And also, for efficient time management, you should have a habit of managing your tasks really well.

The phrase 'a also for an efficient time management' is incorrect. 'Time management' is uncountable and does not need an article 'an'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Commas improve sentence clarity.

× I have been that my mom used to tell me to organize my task before I start working on them, but I used to feel that they are monotonous and very unnecessary to things to do.

✓ I have been told that my mom used to tell me to organize my tasks before I start working on them, but I used to feel that they are monotonous and very unnecessary things to do.

The phrase 'I have been that' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'I have been told'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'them'. The phrase 'unnecessary to things to do' is incorrect; it should be 'unnecessary things to do'.

× Why do you want to write down the task? You just start working on them?

✓ Why do you want to write down the tasks? Can't you just start working on them?

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The corrected version forms a proper question with correct plural 'tasks' and adds 'Can't you' to make the second sentence a proper interrogative.

× But you should always you should make.

✓ But you should always make a list.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive. The correction completes the thought clearly and concisely.

× I prefer making it on the phone because as we know that everything has become digital now.

✓ I prefer making it on the phone because, as we know, everything has become digital now.

Commas are added to set off the phrase 'as we know' for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× So all my assignments, my college work and is on the phone or either on my laptop.

✓ So all my assignments and my college work are on the phone or on my laptop.

The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural subject 'assignments and my college work'; it should be 'are'. Also, 'or either' is redundant; 'or' alone suffices.