列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "making the list" twice and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary such as "remember" instead of "not to forget anything behind."

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me organise the items I want to buy and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some repetition and filler words like "it's a it's a, you know." Try to avoid these and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use more precise vocabulary such as "tasks" instead of "things" and correct grammar like "a to-do list."

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list whenever I have tasks or projects to complete because it helps me stay organised and ensures I finish everything efficiently.

建議: Your answer provides reasons but lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Use linking words like "for example" or "because" properly, and avoid informal phrases like "gotta." Also, be more specific and organise your ideas logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time and causes stress, especially when they feel pressured to complete all the tasks.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has awkward phrasing and grammar mistakes. Avoid repeating ideas and use linking words like "because" and "therefore" to connect your points. Also, use correct expressions such as "torn" instead of "teared."

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because paper lists can easily get lost or torn, whereas my phone is always with me, making it a more reliable and efficient option.

× Yes, I definitely make a list whenever I go for shopping because making the list helps me to organize things that I would love to purchase and it also helps me not to forget anything behind.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list whenever I go shopping because making the list helps me to organize things that I would love to purchase and it also helps me not to forget anything behind.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect. In English, after 'go' when referring to activities like shopping, the verb should be in the '-ing' form without 'for'. So, 'go shopping' is correct instead of 'go for shopping'.

× Yes, I do make A to do list whenever I have things to complete my certain task or projects because it helps me to stay organized and ensures that I complete it.

✓ Yes, I do make a to-do list whenever I have things to complete my certain tasks or projects because it helps me to stay organized and ensures that I complete them.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'projects' and the pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to multiple tasks or projects.

× And it's a it's a, you know, good more efficient way listing. Making a list is efficient.

✓ And it's, you know, a good and more efficient way. Making a list is efficient.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Correct sentence structure requires proper word order and conjunctions. 'Good more efficient way listing' is incorrect; it should be 'a good and more efficient way'.

× There can be several reasons because some people think making list is a waste of time and it just a stressful work which you can't complete or maybe it's something that you gotta do under pressure.

✓ There can be several reasons because some people think making a list is a waste of time and it is just stressful work which you can't complete or maybe it's something that you have to do under pressure.

The phrase 'making list' needs the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'it just a stressful work' is incorrect; it should be 'it is just stressful work' because 'work' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'Gotta' is informal; 'have to' is more appropriate.

× Certainly I prefer to make a list on my phone because I'm making the list on paper.

✓ Certainly I prefer to make a list on my phone because making the list on paper

The phrase 'I'm making the list on paper' is awkward here. It should be 'making the list on paper' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form after 'because'.

× There are high chances that it gets lost or you know, teared down or something happened.

✓ There are high chances that it gets lost or, you know, torn or something happens.

The word 'teared' is incorrect; the past participle of 'tear' is 'torn'. Also, 'something happened' should be 'something happens' to maintain present tense consistency.