列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'it's helped me' nên là 'it helps me', 'miss out' nên là 'miss', và câu cuối hơi dài và lặp lại. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, of course. I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me ensure that I don't miss important items and also helps me stay within my budget.

建議: Bạn trả lời có ý nhưng câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'stay in the deadline' nên là 'meet the deadlines'. Ngoài ra, câu cuối bị lặp 'so that I can do the so that I can'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách nối câu và dùng từ chính xác hơn để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên.

範例: Definitely yes. Especially when I work in my school club and have school tasks. I usually list the tasks I need to do and make sure to meet the deadlines so that I can work efficiently.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'people not enjoy' nên là 'people do not enjoy', 'really lazy' nên là 'too lazy', 'feel really pressure' nên là 'feel really pressured'. Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

範例: I think some people don't enjoy making lists because they find it time-consuming and are too lazy to do it. Also, sometimes when people list their assignments, they feel pressured and stressed because they realize they have many tasks to complete.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách dùng cấu trúc câu mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi nhỏ như 'which really convenient' nên là 'which are really convenient'. Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp từ và dùng từ phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because nowadays there are many online applications that are really convenient. Also, it's easier for me to carry my phone everywhere, like to the supermarket or when I go shopping.

× Yes of course, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it's helped me to ensure that I'm not miss out the important items that I need to buy and also is have me a lot to stay in my budget.

✓ Yes of course, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me to ensure that I don't miss out on the important items that I need to buy and also helps me a lot to stay within my budget.

The phrase 'it's helped me' is incorrect because the present perfect tense is not appropriate here; 'it helps me' (present simple) fits better to express a habitual action. 'I'm not miss out' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't miss out' to use the correct negative form in present simple tense. 'Is have me a lot' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me a lot' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'stay in my budget' should be 'stay within my budget' to use the correct preposition.

× Yes of course, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it's helped me to ensure that I'm not miss out the important items that I need to buy and also is have me a lot to stay in my budget.

✓ Yes of course, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me to ensure that I don't miss out on the important items that I need to buy and also helps me a lot to stay within my budget.

The phrase 'miss out the important items' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'miss out on' when referring to missing something. Also, 'stay in my budget' should be 'stay within my budget' to correctly express staying inside limits.

× Definitely yes. Especially when I work in my school club and also my school tasks too. I usually list the tasks that I need to do and also stay in the deadline so that I can do the so that I can work efficiently.

✓ Definitely yes. Especially when I work in my school club and also on my school tasks. I usually list the tasks that I need to do and also stay within the deadline so that I can work efficiently.

The phrase 'stay in the deadline' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'stay within the deadline' to indicate meeting a time limit. Also, 'do the so that I can work efficiently' is redundant and unclear; it should be simplified to 'work efficiently'. 'Also my school tasks too' is redundant; 'also' or 'too' alone is sufficient.

× Definitely yes. Especially when I work in my school club and also my school tasks too. I usually list the tasks that I need to do and also stay in the deadline so that I can do the so that I can work efficiently.

✓ Definitely yes. Especially when I work in my school club and also on my school tasks. I usually list the tasks that I need to do and also stay within the deadline so that I can work efficiently.

The phrase 'work in my school club' is acceptable, but 'my school tasks' requires the preposition 'on' to indicate working on tasks. 'Stay in the deadline' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'stay within the deadline' to express meeting the deadline.

× I think the reason why people not enjoy making a list because they think that is time consuming and they really lazy to do it.

✓ I think the reason why people do not enjoy making a list is because they think that it is time-consuming and they are really lazy to do it.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' in the negative form 'do not enjoy'. Also, 'that is time consuming' needs the pronoun 'it' as the subject. 'Really lazy to do it' requires the verb 'are' to form the correct predicate 'they are really lazy'.

× But sometime when people list down the assignments that they need to do, they feel really pressure and stress because they realize that they have a lot of tasks that they need to done to to.

✓ But sometimes when people list down the assignments that they need to do, they feel a lot of pressure and stress because they realize that they have a lot of tasks that they need to do too.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Feel really pressure' is incorrect; it should be 'feel a lot of pressure' to use the correct quantifier. 'Need to done to to' is incorrect; it should be 'need to do too' with the base form of the verb after 'need to' and 'too' to indicate also.

× But sometime when people list down the assignments that they need to do, they feel really pressure and stress because they realize that they have a lot of tasks that they need to done to to.

✓ But sometimes when people list down the assignments that they need to do, they feel a lot of pressure and stress because they realize that they have a lot of tasks that they need to do too.

The phrase 'feel really pressure' is incorrect because 'pressure' is an uncountable noun and requires quantifiers like 'a lot of' or 'much'. 'Really' is an adverb and does not fit directly before 'pressure' without a quantifier.

× I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because nowadays we have a lot of online applications which really convenient for people to make a list and also it's easier for me to bring my phone everywhere I go, like a supermarket or when I go shopping.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because nowadays we have a lot of online applications which are really convenient for people to make a list and also it's easier for me to bring my phone everywhere I go, like to a supermarket or when I go shopping.

The phrase 'which really convenient' is missing the verb 'are' to form the correct relative clause. Also, 'like a supermarket' should be 'like to a supermarket' or simply 'like supermarkets' to correctly express the example of places.