列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need and keeps me within my budget.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì động từ và danh từ số nhiều. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

範例: Definitely, I make a list for my work tasks, whether at the club or for school assignments. This helps me avoid missing important tasks, and I usually add deadlines next to each task to finish them on time.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn còn dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and feel pressured when they see many tasks to complete.

建議: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác và lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many apps that help me organize tasks and deadlines, plus I can carry my phone anywhere.

× I think it's can help me to not miss out the item which I need to buy and also it's helped me to stay in my budget.

✓ I think it can help me not to miss out on the items which I need to buy and also it helps me to stay within my budget.

The modal verb 'can' should not be preceded by 'it's'. Also, 'helped' should be in present tense 'helps' to match the context. The phrase 'to not miss out the item' is incorrect; it should be 'not to miss out on the items'. 'Stay in my budget' should be 'stay within my budget' for correct preposition usage.

× I usually make a list for my work task when I working at a club or doing a school assignment.

✓ I usually make a list for my work tasks when I am working at a club or doing a school assignment.

The verb 'working' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'work task' should be plural 'work tasks' to agree with the context.

× Uh, making a list help me to ensure that I not miss out the important tasks.

✓ Uh, making a list helps me to ensure that I do not miss out on the important tasks.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the subject 'making a list'. The phrase 'I not miss out' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not miss out on'.

× And also, uh, is I put the deadline next to each tax so that I can complete everything on time.

✓ And also, uh, I put the deadline next to each task so that I can complete everything on time.

The phrase 'is I put' is incorrect; the verb 'is' should be removed. Also, 'tax' is a typo and should be 'task'.

× I think the reasons why people is not enjoy making a list because they feel really lazy and time consuming to make a list and also when they list out the tasks they need to do like they feel really pressure because they have a lot of things to do.

✓ I think the reasons why people do not enjoy making a list are because they feel it is really lazy and time-consuming to make a list, and also when they list out the tasks they need to do, they feel really pressured because they have a lot of things to do.

The verb 'is' should be 'do' to agree with plural subject 'people'. 'Enjoy' should be in base form after 'do not'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' and used as an adjective. 'Feel really pressure' should be 'feel really pressured' to use the correct adjective form.

× Uh, they have me a lot in how to not list down the tasks that I need to do and also the deadline for each task.

✓ Uh, they help me a lot in how to list down the tasks that I need to do and also the deadline for each task.

The phrase 'they have me a lot' is incorrect; it should be 'they help me a lot'. The phrase 'how to not list down' is awkward; better to say 'how to list down'. 'List down' is acceptable but 'list' alone is more common.