列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but has some repetition and minor grammar issues. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "I prefer" and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with verb tenses and article usage. Keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: I prefer to make a list before going shopping because it helps me stick to my plan and manage my time effectively. Otherwise, I might spend too much time deciding what to buy.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct verb tenses.

範例: Yes, I like to make lists for my work because they help me manage my time efficiently. By following my timetable, I can complete all my tasks on time without wasting time wondering what to do next.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words like "uh" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons.

範例: In my opinion, some people avoid making lists because they prefer flexibility. They don't want to feel restricted by strict plans and like to decide what to do based on the time they have available.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Avoid repeating similar phrases and try to vary your vocabulary.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I always carry it with me, so I can easily check my list whenever I need to, unlike paper lists which can be lost or forgotten.

× I prefer I prefer to make list before going for shopping.

✓ I prefer to make a list before going shopping.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'going for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'going shopping'.

× It helps me to be strict to my list uh my shopping and it helps me to manage my T time.

✓ It helps me to be strict with my list, uh, my shopping, and it helps me to manage my time.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'strict'; the correct preposition is 'with'. Also, 'my T time' seems to be a typo and should be 'my time'. Commas improve clarity.

× Otherwise if I will not prepare list, I will have to spend lots of time for shopping.

✓ Otherwise, if I do not prepare a list, I will have to spend lots of time shopping.

In conditional sentences referring to the future, the present simple tense is used in the 'if' clause, not 'will'. Also, 'prepare list' needs an article 'a'. 'Spend lots of time for shopping' should be 'spend lots of time shopping'. Comma added after 'Otherwise' for clarity.

× I prefer I like to make lists for my work.

✓ I like to make lists for my work.

The repetition 'I prefer I like' is redundant; 'I like' suffices. 'Lists' is plural and correct here.

× It helped me to save my time from thinking that what I have to do umm and I have.

✓ It helps me save time by not having to think about what I have to do, umm, and I have.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate instead of past 'helped'. The phrase is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I'm stuck to my timetable so that I can fulfill all of my works which are required to me.

✓ I'm stuck to my timetable so that I can fulfill all of my work which is required of me.

'Work' is an uncountable noun here, so 'works' is incorrect. Also, 'required to me' should be 'required of me'. 'Stuck to' is acceptable but 'stick to' is more common.

× Well, in my opinion, uh, individuals don't like to make a list because they prefer to be more free.

✓ Well, in my opinion, uh, individuals don't like to make a list because they prefer to be freer.

The adjective 'free' should be in comparative form 'freer' to compare preferences.

× They don't want to be rigid on their plans and sometimes they want to do whatever they like to do according to time that how much time they have for doing the things.

✓ They don't want to be rigid in their plans, and sometimes they want to do whatever they like according to how much time they have to do things.

The correct preposition is 'rigid in' not 'rigid on'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I like to make notes on my phone.

✓ Well, I like to make notes on my phone.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It is more convenient to me because I carry my phone everywhere.

✓ It is more convenient for me because I carry my phone everywhere.

The correct preposition is 'convenient for' not 'convenient to'. No pronoun error but preposition corrected.

× Whenever I require it, I can check my list.

✓ Whenever I need it, I can check my list.

'Require' is formal and less common in this context; 'need' is more natural. No pronoun error.

× So I prefer to use mobile phone rather than using paper.

✓ So I prefer to use my mobile phone rather than paper.

The phrase 'rather than using paper' is better expressed as 'rather than paper' to avoid redundancy. Also, 'my mobile phone' is more natural.