列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: "It helps" thay vì "It's help") và tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: "important things" và "important items" có thể gộp lại). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn hơn và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I always prepare a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me avoid forgetting important items, especially when I'm in a hurry. I usually use a mobile app to organize my list, which is very convenient since I can easily add or remove items as needed.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh dùng những cụm từ không chính xác như "it's work" hay "It's happy very much". Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because all tasks are important and I need to complete them on time. This method works well for me and helps me stay organized as a student.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác. Bạn nên dùng cấu trúc đúng như "they have a good memory to remember everything" thay vì "they have a a brain to memorizing". Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they don't have enough time, and they prefer to rely on their good memory to remember everything.

建議: Câu trả lời chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ "It depends on the situation" thay vì "Every condition". Ngoài ra, cần chú ý cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I use paper lists when I'm studying, but I prefer using my phone for activities outside, such as shopping, going to the gym, or playing badminton.

× It's help me avoid forgetting important things, important items especially when I'm in hurry.

✓ It helps me avoid forgetting important things, especially when I'm in a hurry.

The original sentence uses 'It's help' which is incorrect. The correct form is 'It helps' because the subject 'It' requires the third person singular form of the verb 'help'. Also, 'in hurry' should be 'in a hurry' because the phrase requires the article 'a'.

× I use a mobile app to organize my list and which is convenient and I can easily add or remove item as needed.

✓ I use a mobile app to organize my list, which is convenient, and I can easily add or remove items as needed.

The phrase 'and which is convenient' is incorrect; it should be 'which is convenient' as a relative clause referring to the mobile app. Also, 'item' should be plural 'items' to match the context of multiple items being added or removed.

× I use a mobile app to organize my list and which is convenient and I can easily add or remove item as needed.

✓ I use a mobile app to organize my list, which is convenient, and I can easily add or remove items as needed.

The word 'item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple things that can be added or removed from the list.

× Yes I do. I make a list for my work because everything in work is important and I need to complete all my tasks and it's work.

✓ Yes, I do. I make a list for my work because everything at work is important and I need to complete all my tasks, and it works.

The phrase 'it's work' is incorrect; it should be 'it works' to indicate that making a list is effective. Also, 'in work' should be 'at work' to correctly express location or context.

× It's happy very much in my work as a student.

✓ I am very happy with my work as a student.

The original sentence uses 'It's happy very much' which is incorrect. 'Happy' is an adjective describing a person, so the subject should be 'I am'. Also, 'very much' is better replaced with 'very happy' and 'in my work' should be 'with my work' to express satisfaction.

× In my opinion, people sometimes don't like making lists because they don't have time to make a list and they have a a brain to memorizing everything.

✓ In my opinion, people sometimes don't like making lists because they don't have time to make a list and they have a good memory to memorize everything.

The phrase 'they have a a brain to memorizing' is incorrect. It should be 'they have a good memory to memorize' because 'brain' is not used this way and 'memorizing' should be the base verb 'memorize' after 'to'.

× Every condition. Sometimes I use paper when I'm studying and I use my phone for outside activity like shopping like gyming or sporting play badminton.

✓ In every situation, sometimes I use paper when I'm studying, and I use my phone for outside activities like shopping, going to the gym, or playing badminton.

'Every condition' is unclear and should be 'In every situation'. 'Outside activity' should be plural 'outside activities'. 'Gyming' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'going to the gym'. 'Sporting play badminton' is incorrect; it should be 'playing badminton'.